Aw, that is so sad. I want to read more. Make her come back. That was such an awsomely sad story!!

Margy . .. *whines* It's emo . . .

Though I love the dog popping up.

Wow...amazing...that's all there is to say!!

That was lovely story - a very sad one ..*sniff*

*sniff sniff* Great story!!

Myriadragon, that was absolutely beautiful. At first, I thought it was a dream w/ John imagining Liz there, but I love how she actually was there, talking to him. And how his subconscious gave her everything she wanted because he enjoys making her happy *sniff*. Absolutely heartbreaking and beautiful, I love it.

Luv,
Miss Pookamonga ;-P

Very nicely written Myri. I think it fits with the song quite well the especially with the "even if I say it will be alright..." I look forward to the next one by you ^^

I salute you Sparky Army! What a great idea...I will read every one!

Wow that's sad.

That was an awesome story for the first day of Year of the Spark!!

Great start to YotS, I think I might go cry now!

Woah. I'm kind of speechless right now. *sniff* Wow.

An amazing and emotional start the year. I love it!

I don't wanna go next now *bites nails*, lol.

Wow! Great start to the Year of the Spark. This was incredibly powerful and both of them were very much in character. Loved the sort of jokey conversation at the start, especially; you like making me happy!
And then the angst that followed was brilliant!
Great job!

This is really interesting! Nicely done and very original...