M, interesting concept. And a good effort at using your vocab words. :) Er, I found quite a few of them to be slightly misused--not incorrect, just given in contexts that don't really cohere with the connotations of the words themselves. But generally, well done.

What?? No more chapters? Aww, comeon! You stopped when it started getting really really good (was great already)! *sighs* So many good stories stop right when it's getting great, only to show that it was only a one-shot in the first place.

Great job! Definately an interesting take.

man, that was really great. I was just a little confused at the end. Who was the person that said "Thanks, Harry" in the last sentence? If you could tell me I would stop obssessing over it.

G. (GREAT STORY! WRITE MORE)

Ah! So good and yet I'm rawring like Max for some more!

Uhm, I thought you went a teensy bit overboard with your vocab in the letter, it passed eloquent and went to hard to understand.


Nice
Ellae

This was really great! I love the idea that so little was known about the war, but it seemed a little farfetched that they didn't know You-Know-Who's name. I mean, Harry and others insisted on using it, and even if books are burned there is still oral history, and more books can always be written. One thing that kind of bothered me was the language. It is wonderful that you know so many big and obscure words, but cramming too many into one sentence makes it sound ridiculous and pretentious. I agree that it is nice to use words that other people don't use very frequently, but it gives the reader the impression that the author sat down with a thesaurus and tried to make the work sound intelligent. I don't mean that you should stop using good, strong words in your writing, just try to keep your style natural.
Anyways, great job! I am looking forward to more of your writing.

wow that was really intruging! (i think i spelled that wrong!)
U should totally write more and change it from a one shot to a full story!
Fabulous job!
IS.