I enjoyed it. Can you write more. I agree that there needs to be more Moribito fics.

I agree with you. There aren't enough fics about Moribito.

Keep writing, you have at least one person who appreciates you for it. :-)

Omg

>< I just wish something had happened between them at the end . I mean when they were fighting La Lunga and Tanda got hurt... Balsa was screaming his name... and helping him... and that's it!

*sigh* Tanda is so wonderful...~

lovely story, very IC...write more? like u said, theres a lack of fic for this series

Really, really nice piece. I loved the way he wants to be able to touch her without the touch having a medical purpose... It's really in-character, and very, very sweet. :3

I like this. Tanda, most definitely loves Balsa and I like the way you portrayed that in this fic. :)

I'm watching this little by little in Japan, and even though I don't understand everything, I'm really enjoying this relationship.
Good shot!

You captured Tanda perfectly in this, I should think. Excellent work. You are right--there needs to be more writing for this show. I only hope I can contribute something someday as well.

Very nice! I loved the relationship between these two in the anime. This is short, but really taps into what Tanda has to be feeling.

Also, you're right...there needs to be more for this series!

hah very cute... i just watched the entire series...and there was so much left to it that i wanted to scream...i mean there were two mature adults who knew they had feelings for one another...yet they didn't act...

but onto your fic...i liked it a lot...no gushy happy love that would have never happened...just a glimpse into tanda's mind...well done

A nice story, thank you for writing it ^^