i love this story so much

I liked the first chapter... what is going to happen next?

I have written my own story... The Love Story Of Edward and Bella... or you could look up Breaking Dawn21

keep it going...

~Breaking Dawn21~

Aw, I loved this chapter! I can't wait to read the confrontation between Ruthie and Tito.

Unfortunately, I've gotta go now but I am most definitely coming back to read the rest of this!

I hope you update so I'll have another chapter to read!

Oh, so Tito IS in a coma! With all those machines, plus the obvious head injury, his rating on a scale of 3-14 where 3 is basically brain-dead and 14 is basically sound asleep, Tito seems to be somewhere around 4 to 6. I doubt he'd be talking? :S

Look it up on Wikipedia :P I remember doing research when I did AU for BONES earlier this year. It's not up, I lost it unfortunately. :(

Anyways, back to the fic!

Ruthie slapped that H-O! WOOT! And "I high-fived your face" LMAO that was great! :D

Aw, some Marthie loving. Their banter is cute. But it seemed OOC, I dunno, it's been a while since I really enjoyed Marthie. I've been out of the shipping for close to 2 and a half years.

Wow! I was expecting you to kill off Tito! But I'm confused, he got head injuries, shouldn't he be in a coma? :S The multiple machines should imply that as well, since Tito wouldn't survive on his own without them if he was in a coma.

I don't think anyone would wake up in a time frame of 30 minutes or so after such an accident.

Whoa, wait, Tito gets hit by a car? 0_o

Wow. But other than that, I'm really liking this! :D

I can't believe Sandy abandoned Aaron! That makes me so angry, one of my bffs and her bro+sis's mother left when her sis was a baby. And bore two more kids, left after bff's half-bro was little. <_<

I hope she returns so Ruthie can teach her a good, cold, painful lesson.

That is good to hear, I have read this story about 20 times now and it has kept my eye so keep up the good work.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Should I give up or should I just keep chasing pavements hoping that you'll update soon.

O.M.F.G! Why do you torture me so much?!
I don't know if I can wait much longer for you to update this story. I'm going crazy here!
hugs & kisses
Steph.

Will you be continuing this story in the near future?
I really love this story and I am dying to know what's gonna happen next.
Hugs & Kisses
Steph.

Please don't tell me you've abandoned this story.
It would break my heart.
Too many of the authors on here have done that.

loved please add more soon

Hang off cliffs much?!!...
It's been almost a month since your last chapter, I'm dyin' over here!
Get updating already and make it a long chapter to make up for the agonising wait!
Ideally it would be awesome if you could post a chapter before the end of the month (nod nod, wink wink!)
Peace out!

So HALLOWEEN is almost here,
The time when spooky things appear,
But I know what would do the TRICK, you could TREAT us to some more of this fic!
PLEASE xoxoxo
Steph.