Reviews for Trial and Error

Reviews For: Trial and Error - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

reader 2008-07-23 ch 3, anon.	abuseI noticed that it's been a while since you've updated, I hope that you haven't forgotten about this story! Well I read in your profile you plan on finishing this story, so let me just say I can't wait until that time comes! UPDATE SOON!
Monkey_Ball_Warrior 2008-07-23 ch 3, anon.	abuseUpdate soon! :D
QWERTYminnie 2008-07-23 ch 3, anon.	abuseUPDATE!
maybe_baby 2008-07-18 ch 3, anon.	abuseUpdate soon, I'm going crazy!
QWERTYminnie 2008-07-16 ch 3, anon.	abuseVery good, update ASAP!
maybe_baby 2008-07-16 ch 3, anon.	abuseUPDATE SOON!
maybe_baby 2008-07-13 ch 3, anon.	abuseYes, this chapter was a little on the short side, but it was great nonetheless. So Sam is pregnant, wow, can't wait for the next couple of chapters! I wonder whether they will have a boy or a girl. And once again, Danny is so sweet, comforting her and telling her that he will be by her side no matter what. I also wonder how their parents will react, but it probably won't be pretty. But Danny's parents will most likely be more understanding and kind. And what about Jazz and Tucker's relationship. Hm, there is so much I look forward to in the upcoming chapters. Just don't wait to long to update!
maybe_baby 2008-07-13 ch 2, anon.	abuseI just read the second chapter, and it was even better than the first one, great job! I have a feeling that Sam is pregnant, but I'm not sure. I guess you might reveal that in the third chapter, which I will read next. Once again, great job, Danny is so sweet. Also, I have a question: What was the gift he gave her?
maybe_baby 2008-07-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat job on the first chapter! I just have one question: How old are Danny, Sam, Tucker, and Jazz in this story?
Monkey_Ball_Warrior 2008-07-01 ch 3, anon.	abuseI just read this entire story today and let me just say that you did a great job. I have no complaints, really, everything was perfect. Most of the Danny/Sam pregnancy stories that I've seen lately have just been written terribly, lacking detail and emotion. Also, in the other stories, when they've told their parents the pregnancy news their reactions are so far off what I think they would actually be. So that's just a tip: Make sure their parents react reasonably, not too kind and understanding but yet not too mean or critical. Sorry if I confused you there, you seem to do a good job of keeping the characters IC, not OOC, so I'm sure you know what you're doing. I can't wait to read about the pain and agony Sam went through during the actual childbirth, that should be fun. And also, I can't wait to see whether the baby will be a boy or girl. There is just so much to look forward to in this story. And yes, the gap between April 1 and December 25 is huge, so including another chapter might be a good idea. That, or just making the next chapter really long, which I might like better actually. Whatever, it's entirely your choice. Sorry about this long, and probably boring, review. I just wanted to let you know what a fantastic writer you are and how much I love this story. Keep up the good work and don't take too long to update! Sincerely, Monkey_Ball_Warrior
Superheroes Fanatic 2008-06-18 ch 3,	abuseWow, this was awesome! I hope to read the next chapter soon. I NEVER thought THAT would happen...well, I'll see ya soon!
reader 2008-05-29 ch 3, anon.	abuseThis is a GREAT story, UPDATE soon!
reader 2008-05-10 ch 3, anon.	abuseYou are doing a great job with this story, keep it up! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Also, I have a quick question: What year of college are Danny and Sam in?
chichicutie 2008-04-07 ch 3,	abuseI loved it. Oh so sam and danny are going to have a baby. Can't wait for the next chapter.
cutereviewgirl 2008-04-03 ch 3,	abuseHaha, I was right! lol Well, that'd one interesting April Fool's 'joke'.. I know I wouldn't be laughing. Anwyays, that was a great chapter tho, short but good and direct to the point, as Danny had mentioned. lol Well.. can't wait for you to UPDATE! UPDATE! -CUTIE

Return to Top