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Reviews For: Innocent Souls

hea10k
2008-07-21
ch 7,
abuseNice chapter :) feeling bad for the guard..but more for his prisoners.
Sakura Wishes
2008-07-01
ch 6,
abuseI think you're trying to make me cry! Aren't you?! lolz Great story so far sis. It's amazing. But really SAD! I hope you make the story a little happier soon. lolz

hm...? I wander where you got the needles idea, i think i know. It was great how you used that idea and stuff...lolz do you even understand what I'm saying? lolz ch...what am I talking about, no one does. lolz UPDATE SOON SISSY!
shadow thief wolf
2008-06-29
ch 6,
abuseAww, that was so sad. Nice chapter.
shadow thief wolf
2008-06-26
ch 5,
abusegreat chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next.
hea10k
2008-06-23
ch 5,
abuseoh god. amazing chapter, seriously brought chills. great job :D can't wait to see Luna be saved (and she'd better!)
julieredman
2008-06-23
ch 5,
abuseWow, you are good!!
shadow thief wolf
2008-05-15
ch 4,
abuseNice chapter. It carried the emotions very well and was so sad at the end. You also did a wonderful job with presenting a new and interesting twist to the story and I can't wait to see how you carry it out! A very well written chapter. Update soon!
hea10k
2008-05-13
ch 4,
abuseOH DEAR GOD! This is so sad. I want to cry :( Amazingly well written chapter, but SO SAD. update soon! I am dying to see happier moment in this story.

:)
shadow thief wolf
2008-03-16
ch 3,
abuseI really like the new title. That was a great chapter too! Poor Luna! What are they going to do to her?!! Great job, update soon!
hea10k
2008-03-16
ch 3,
abusenice new title. OMG! I. Hate. Needles! Luna no!
hea10k
2008-02-18
ch 2,
abuseaw no...I hate that warden :( great chapter !
shadow thief wolf
2008-02-13
ch 2,
abuseYay, your back!! Great chapter! Update soon.
hea10k
2008-01-14
ch 1,
abuseI like it :D good luck with this story :)
shadow thief wolf
2008-01-02
ch 1,
abuseYay! That was great start! I can't wait until you update.^^
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