Some pretty original concepts - the diary idea seems to work well. But I need to point out that an ** is the point of sex, **, handjobs, etc. If your character has been keeping Skwisgaar satisfied for however long, chances are she's given him an **. Check a dictionary if you're unsure.

so duchebag
so **
so not metal

HOLY CRAP! i love it! it took a little while cause the stories were long but it was incredible! i think its wonderful on how everybody found someone. GREAT WORK!

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Yay magic! I'd love ot read a sex scene if you want to write it! Got some tribunal action too :D

I liked learning more about Amelia :D she seemed all shyish in past chapters so its nice to get to know her. Wiccan is awesome, it's always been interesting to me so it's cool Amelia is one! I love dogs x] Princess seems adorable, although she is kind of bad...meanie Dethklok for not liking her! Although I kind of figured they wouldn't, lol.

Vanessa was the most logical in getting the hair sample xD the way the other girls did it made me giggle. I thought it was kind of sweet that Skwis was waitin for Bianca, and that Drew felt bad about taking the hair, she's so darn sweet! I was surprised when Geneva took part in it too tho, I didn't expect that but it plays well into the story. :D

Nice Dethklok song! And... for a second there I got thrown off. I know you said that the guys were going to dream the girls deaths but I didn't realize you had started it! I freaked out for a sec, like "No she killed them! T.T" but yea, lol I'm SO HAPPY you didn't!

...but WOAH it got depressing! Poor guys...they really love those girls. xP It made me sad to see them so upset, poor Dethklok...and then the girls regretting it and junk, really emotional chapter but you still managed to keep the guys in character. Nice work, I'm really impressed by it because Dethklok plus emotions I never really thought would mix but you play it off in a really good way.

I want teenage kid to get a girl! It's funny that he's been in the story so long and he's still without a name xD

Ebil Whitney at the end! Aurora is a cool name. LOVE this chapter, UPDATE SOON!

I liked the chapter, Amelia's a good character. I would definitely like to read sex scenes. If you feel comfortable writing it.

Aw this chapter was beyond cute, I love how the guys would respond to those situations. Great spell I really liked it ^-^

It's great that you're writing all these stories, I like to read about the band and girls, not slash. I got to read more of this.

Awesome. I've been watching this one for a while, and every time proves more than worth the wait. Keep it up, I'll certainly be looking forward to it.

:D MARNER~! Yay update! This chapter is great! Love how it opened...sex chatter makes me giggle. xD I think the babies name is perfect too. ^_^ Toki's so cute, wanting to out-father Skwisgaar xD so Toki-like! I adore him and Drew so much

But woah, you weren't kidding about the intense sex talk! I like it, nice integration of it...is that stuff true? I'm curious, lol...'cause if so I just learned some fun stuff to try, tee hee

I was worried something happened to the baby when they couldn't find him xP Bad Dethklok for drinking when watching a little baby! ...but so like them to do that, lol. Good they got banned before something more scary could have happened...but oy, they even failed at LEARNING to care for a child...silly boys. It's so funny, the stuff they did at the park is so like them. xD Awesome job Marner. Can't believe Whitney escaped! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! xP !

Interesting Friday the 13th note, I love horror movies so I think I'll look into that~! Keep the chapters comin~! :]

aw that was so sweet, I think Angelina should get pregnat next and have a girl, I wanna see what Nathan would do if he had a daughter hee hee ^-^

Nice work with the girl's names again! Baby name for Charles and Geneva...hm...iono xD Something pretty if it's a girl ;D and er...iono about boys. :[ I figure Charles would name the kid something common, and er...formal? lol, just 'cause he's so professional-like.

Tribunal is...AWESOME! Angelina's baby shower gift idea was great, I think I'll use that next time I'm invited to one xD I've never heard that Breakfast Club song before...but I never saw the movie either. :[ I HEARD it was epic. :D All the girl's relationships are going so smoothly, I love it...I mean, each has it's own problems and stuff, but each couple is willing to compromise so things will still work out, and that is great. ^^

Angelina's roots are so fascinating. :O I'd love to go to Africa someday like that~Nathan is mean for making her meet his parents alone ;_; ..although I admit I do imagine him actually doing that xD It's still so mean though! I did not think Dick would ever...ANYTHING with anyone, lol, but it's nice how you've got him and Kitty, I'm glad she found someone! 'n Carol kinda too (even if she's a player!) xD Dick can fight too, fricken' awesome xD

Sucks Nathan's parents are so judgmental (which you'd totally expect outta them), but Angelina's dad is so accepting :[ WELL it's good he is, but poor Angelina xO The song Nathan wrote for her was awesome, did you write that yourself? I can't remember if you said you did or not, but I liked it~! Angelina's dress sounds so pretty too *_* Yay she got married xD

...and Whitney is up to something cynical! D: Can't wait to see what happens with what the voodoo lady was saying...and who gets married next! Great work Marner, update soon! x]

Long, but definitely worth the read. I think you should be very proud of this, I certainly enjoyed it.

Yay ^-^ this was so good, I feel bad that Nathan's parnets got jugemental at her.

You weren't joking when you said it was long xD Took me 'til just now to finish...but I enjoyed it! Juicy chapter~I sorta add comments as I go through the story, so this'll be kinda long :[

I loved the roadie marriage, it's not often I see people do much with the roadies in their fanfic so I thought that that rocked! ...and the seduction! Atleast Murderface didn't give in...and I like the way Toki handled it. xD It's like he's so oblivious, it was so Toki-like! 'n Angelina has such a big heart to forgive Kitty, and she's so brave too...standing up to Charles is scary xD You brought the twins back for trial~! Vanessa's cousin seems like such a dirty-creepy kinda guy...sorta pervy? Iono if thats what you were going for BUT if it was nice way of putting it xD Didn't come out exactly and say it, just hinted at it. If you weren't intending that, I still thought it was cool, lol. Angelina's sister seems so charming. It seems fitting that Angelina was the oldest in her family, she has that kind of...protective, motherly sorta vibe to her. 'n her past occupation was strangely suitable for a Dethklok employee...xD

Insane asylum = scary!! x_x like wayway scary...stupid mean Whitney...But atleast she got what she deserved >:D I like how the tension between Charles and Angelina seems to have died down some too~! I'm glad stuff turned out ok with everyone in the end (threesomes are hot)!

AND Nathan finally proposed! Great way to end the chapter, can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^

that was so much to read but it was so great! nathan seems so human b/c he makes mistakes too and stuff, being in a asylum sounds scary poor angelina--shes my favorite, she grows so much in the story. i realy like this addition im so excited about whats next!!