Good first chapter and I hope you continue, but its a little disjointed. If you put breaks in between scenes it will flow a lot better. And I love the Daniel/Harry pairing!! Very unique! And could you maybe explain better how Harry and Daniel became a couple?? I don't really see it in Harry's character to jump into bed with someone that he barely knows...

Good start actually. Can make this an excellent story, of maybe the reason Daniel contacts Harry beside the whole VOldie thing, is that perhaps he's the last Ancient of Earth of something? That way, the xover becomes more natural. As for this fic... it's confusing and I have no idea about the time-line... either mark them better or perhaps write the flashbacks in cursive.

Cheers!

this has ot to be one of my all time fave hp/stargate crossovers.

good chapter

OMG!! There Better be more! You CANNOT leave something this good as a oneshot!

some of the parts i thought were a little disjointed but overall it was a nice one shot.

I want a second chapter! me likes :D

so cute

You had better have a sequel already written if you think you can just end this story like that!

Hey I like the story, however it was sometimes unclear whether you were in the past or present. Using some kind of break in the writing would make it easier to understand. Anyways great idea. I always love HP/SG crossovers.

I like the Sam/Harry pairing, very cute.

shame that this is a one-shot, would love to see it fleshed out and continued

it's a little rough.. but I like it..

and Daniel/Harry slash.. yup!

ok great story there so much story here. Will therer be a second part or is it fininshed

I like it. I like crossovers with SG1, even though their are not that many good ones, and I love slash- so its a great when the two come together. you should try to write some more. Great job