Amazing.

You crafted this brilliantly... I felt Tear's pain, Asch's shame... (Hey! That kinda rhymed!) I felt everyone’s shock. It was heartbreakingly moving - beautifully painful, is you will. This is just so powerful. Reading it simply takes my breath away. Yes, your fanfic almost made me die. ^_^ But at least I would be able to die happy that I got to read at least one chapter of this spectacular story!

Thank you so much for writing (and posting) this! I eagerly await your next update! I can't wait to see how your plot develops!

Oh, wow, poor Tear. This is a good story! There's plenty of detail and emotions put into it, and the characters are definitely in character.

Update soon!