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ausumist
2009-07-20 . chapter 19
update soon.
ausumist
2009-07-07 . chapter 17
love the story cant wait for the update.
Henny1991
2009-04-20 . chapter 19
It is so amazing. I get what you said about beginning to dislike the story, but then you have to write it back to the way you want it to be. I loved the story. You write good and are good with describing things. you make it easier to visualize. good luck with the rest of the story.
Elven at Heart
2009-01-09 . chapter 18
This was a wonderful chapter! Hope to see another update soon!

Elven at Heart
cjm1788
2009-01-01 . chapter 18
good chapter. i hope jacob dies soon. i always hope jacob dies though, in any story. he rarely does, so it would be a real treat if he did. i can't stand that guy.
PinkDrink
2008-11-06 . chapter 17
lol GD MAN!! lol your prologe for this story got me to read the rest and now I have to wait a month DAMIT lol oh well, good writing takes time and I'm sure your other storys will be great... can't wait till you update again though!!
Gilraen Aclamense
2008-10-26 . chapter 16
update...it's fantastic...update now please. I really like Iris' attitude. I would really like her to have a happy ending...or atleast die happy. Why'd she have to say it to the cullen's though. Especially to Carlisle...I heart carlisle.
braceface
2008-09-30 . chapter 16
please update soon!
Elven at Heart
2008-09-19 . chapter 16
This was a really great chapter. I'm really glad that Bella took Iris' side, and didn't let the Cullen's bully her into telling Iris' secrets... Anyways, hope to see another update soon!

Elven at Heart
Scorpiongurl324
2008-09-14 . chapter 16
It was good, now we know why she is the way she is, which is good. Update soon.
-Kia
cjm1788
2008-09-09 . chapter 16
good chapter. short, but good.
bracinni09
2008-09-08 . chapter 16
aww...poor Iris... :(
thank you for updating!
hope to see the next chapter soon!!
animallover0109
2008-09-08 . chapter 16
YIPPEE! Awesome chapter! Plez update soon!
FireInHeaRt29
2008-09-08 . chapter 16
Aw! stupid cullens ! i feel so bad for her
Elven at Heart
2008-07-30 . chapter 15
This was a really great chapter! I'm looking forward to your next update, which will hopefully be soon!

Elven at Heart
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