This left me wondering if the man in the shop is Roy...

Wow this is intense...love it.

Hm... sounds good

I love this story! It's really exciting to see who the guy at the cafe was, though I think it's Roy but that's just me... It's really nice to see some Pride Ed, It makes me really happy and sad >.< Anyways, this story is really great! And though it isn't really funny then at the same time it's really funny. I dunno it just is... In my mind xD Please continue this and update whenever you can!!

Sincerely ~Shikamarurules1

UPDATE!

I do hope that you will continue with this story because I'm anxious to see what Roy (it was Roy, right?) will do now that he saw Pride. One hand he is a homunculus but on the other hand he looks just like Ed and has his memories as Roy possible would know with all his encounters and reports that he has had or read about them.

I'm glad that you decided to resurrect Lust, she was a very intriguing character.

I really like Pride, more so then the others. I like how you made him a softy at heart, and becoming more like Ed. And I really like how you made us think who was sitting at the deli at the end. You always keep us wanting more, you are talented.

Story added to alerts, I'm not quite sure if it's good enough for favs- but that's just because it's so short. *Hint

I loved the flashes of the past and how you wrote pride. it was wonderful! :D

Oh, it's plot.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Please up-date soon!

O. This was so awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Sad but gorgeous. I can totally see that as an alternate ending to the series (and possibly where the manga is going, hmm?).

I loved the obvious friendship between Ed and Riza before Edward's death, Riza's denial and Pride's growing awarness of himself.

This nearly made me cry. Is this a oneshot or will you be continuing it?

I loved Pride in this, and Riza, and heck, i liked the whole thing and had a moment of "NU!! chapter is over? Why?!?!" Yeah, so i look forward to more. Love the set up and situation. :D

Very beautiful and very sad. It could be complete just as it is. Roy's reaction to Edward's death, and Riza's reaction to that really got to me.