aw...that's the best Lizwin story I've read yet! You did a really good job writing this, and a story by the point of view of a little mouse? That's so cute! I thought it might have been Marti in the beginning, but I guess not. Very creative. Very well done! =)

I really liked this. I've never read a Lizzy/Edwin fic before but I think this one was really well done. And the third person narrative really enhanced the story. I enjoyed this greatly. :)

I love this story. At first I thought that the mouse was Marti or something because everybody DOES think that she is just a stupid little girl, but I was later proven wrong. I love how you wrote this with suspence. I was rooting for the kiss and when it DID happen, I wasn't expecting it to happen. Keep writing!

maschan

Just like being a fly on the wall... well... I rat in a closet I gather. Awesome! Loved it! Bravo!
*faves*

Aw, how cute! I loved it. I think that was the best Lizwin I've ever read. Writing from the point of view of the mouse was brilliant. I figured it was either a mouse or a spider.
Good job. =]

Aw, that was so incredibly adorable. I felt so sorry for the little mouse I felt like I was gonna cry! I love it.

Absolutely lovely story.
Clever and unique and quite enjoyable.

WOW
WOW
WOW!

The entire time Im like WHO IN THE HECK IS WATCHING??!??!?

And then I guessed a board game, and Im like No...That cant be it. Just excellent job. Seriously...Best Lizwin Ive seen in...Well. Might be so far.

Excellent writing, I love how it starts at the beginning, and then flashes ahead...I cant stress how superb the writing/plot was. Excellent job...I listened to Chemicals React Remix the entire thing!

-Kelly

Oh my gawd I loved that so much! At first I thought it was Marti, but then when you said 'she' didn't know who Casey was, somehow it clicked that it was a mouse and that was further proven when you said overweight exterminator and then the end. I really liked that. Its so perfect - a mouse. Because Lizzie loves her animal rights and edwin and lizzie are like mice in how they have their little notes and spy on whoever it is at the time. Like little investigators the way a mouse runs around the house investigating people's lives, in this case the lizwin story. So, yeah, it was REALLY good. I havent read many lizwin stories, but I am very glad that I read this one. In fact, I couldn't stop reading it even when it became lunch time. So, you can see that it was a really captivating story. And so perfect for this duo. After all, their place is the games closet, so it only makes sense that that would be where they get together and a cute little mouse would be watching them. So, awesome job. I'll be looking for more excellent stories from you in the future. XD

loved it update soon

aw this was cute. i love edwin!

Aw. So sweet! But not overly so, either.
Loved the perspective, and the guessing about it in the beginning. At first I thought it was Marti! Hehe. You make me want to hug the mouse.
What I especially liked is that the mouse was an onlooker- and we were right there with him on the same plane. So his emotions or feelings/thoughts kind of translated to us as well. You were right- very unique!
*applauds*

This is AMAZING! Wow, a fic narrated by a mouse. You're awesome!

Well, that was quite original, I must say. A story told from a mouse's point of view? Would've never thought of that!

Though, I had a feeling it was some type of rodent as I kept nearing the end. At first, I thought it was Marti, but then I decided it couldn't be, and after the "Now I don’t know who Casey is but if only she knew that she wasn’t truly talking to herself" line, my theory was confirmed.

Somewhere between that line and the end, I figured it was one of her two pet mice that she rescued in "Mice and Men".

Was it?

Or was it just a random mouse?

Out of curiosity. ;P

Still, great fic! I really enjoyed it! I hope you write more Lizwin fics in the future!

That was new! It could have sounded horribly cheesy and very weird if it wasn't written right but you wrote it perfectly! I loved it! Especially these lines:

“Ed, we’re making a mess.” The girl said light heartedly.
“Don’t care.”

“Come on, Mom and George are out let’s head up to your room to, ah- ‘watch movies’.” Her smile grew.
“I love watching movies.” The boy said sarcastically.