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Alix Zin
2008-01-02 . chapter 1
This is a sweet little oneshot, my favortie part is when Charlie is thinking back to right after the hanging which is probably my favorite Charlie moments (yep, definitly have a Charlie torture problem).

This isn't that importnat but just for contructive critism you should know that eight pills a day is a rather ridiculus number. Though it varies by dosage, its likly that he would have gone in to siezures by four or five pills. And by eight, well, he'd be dead. Also people typicaly don't use antidepressents to get high, seeing as it doesn't cause one. It is a common suicide drug though. But thiers no way you would have known this, unless your wierdly obsessed with this stuff like I am.
BooneShannon4evr
2008-01-02 . chapter 1
Aw this made me cry. Poor Charlie! I loved it!
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