I liked it. You should definitely continue.

ohayou!! the story is short demo kawaii please cont and chat with me sometime

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Quite nice. I'm lookin forward on yr next chapter. =)

you have a few spelling/grammar mistakes but i love the story
keep going and please don't take my comment to be rude

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so sweet of mikan!!

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'tis good so far...mysterious.
One thing I think you could do is add full stops/periods at the end of sentences. Just something to think about for future writing. =)