This story has one of the most sophisticated plot that i've ever came across. Breathtaking.

That was really confusing. And interesting. I would've gotten so mad if she left Edward.

-Ally

I watched that episode of Buffy The Vampire Slayer too.

I'm quite happy that I'm not the only one who thought that the awesomestness episode everr.

Really bizarre and very good. She was always that conflicted but never wanted to face it. She wanted to live in a mythical world that was perfect. Never have to face the fact she was causing pain to so many people. This could have been her nightmare the night she told Jacob she loved Edward. Had made her final choice.

Absolutely terrific story! Wow-I really didn't know which was which until the very end...kind of.

You rock!

that.. was... awesome. i had no idea what she would have chosen lol, it kept me on the edge of my seat all the way to the end!

that being said, i thought the final swap back to edward was a little anticlimactic ; ; oh well. glad she chose right :P

or did she o.o the asylum...

Poor Bella, so lost and alone. I have read another story called Counting on the Rain where Bella was placed in an institution after Edward left, it is very good as is this but both are very different.

This maybe an old story of yours but today it's new to me and the first chapter caught me and held me as my heart started to race with sadness.

Wow part of me is thinking, that if I was Bella, I would coose to stay down the rabbit hole!

How hard would it suck to have Edward, to be so very in love with him, only to wake up and realise he never existed, you would morn him like he had died.

Its so funny just how well that argument works, that the 'twilight' version of her life must be the false one, because its crazy otherwise, right?

Great chapter!

I love the 'is bella crazy' stories, I will have to see if someone has created a community for them. The best one so far has been one by bellaflan which totaly wrecked my mind for days. I am jumping into yours with great relish!

WTF! So confusing. But in the end I think that she's actually in the mental instutution. There's no freaking way she met a demon.

It was really good

even if it was not real i would still go sith edward and when the doctor give you that shot to kill you that is then she becomes a vampier so

but you have to belive edward how can you not