I love how the story is going! The plot is great and not confusing. Your style of writing is great! Keep it up!

Good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens in the next one.

this is a great story- look forward to future updates. i like the idea that naruto is a pacifist- and seems to think before he acts.

Good chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.

Very good fic. I'm really enjoying it and look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

Very good fic. I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

? Is Naruto a Kazuma?

Too many god damn flashback...

Very good chapter. I can't wait to read what happens in the next one.

Great chapter. I look forward to reading what happens in the next one.

Bold and Italics make this Chapter alomst unreadable... :/

Cool Story! I look forward to Naruto being able to rescue Hinata-chan like a knight in shinning armor should.

Good chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.

“B-but that’s not w-what happened.” Hinata joined the conversation. While they were guarding Tazuna, she activated her clan’s Byakugan (Evil Eye) to


It's not evil eye, it's white eye

Hinata Hyuuga has been the third member of Team 7 from then on.

I had a feeling ever since 'she'

Oh, very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next!