A great story. Very well written.

aw this is so sad! It's the real Jacob, who I don't really like cause he's so cocky, but reading in his POV made me feel sorry for him.

Really, really good story! You're very talented - I could never have pulled that one off! I really love how you made Jake, because you didn't remake him, you used how he actually is in the books! (Gasp! Unheard of). Anyway, I'm adding this to my favorite stories list :)

Not familiar with the song, as I am not much of a country fan, but I loved the story. It was an excellent peek into Jacob's thoughts.

I LOVE that song! and it's perfect for this! great job! :-D