Reviews for Serpent's Curse

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purple-ladybug 2008-07-26 ch 5,	abuseI really enjoy your story! I do hope to read your next chapter soon!
Hinata1020569 2008-07-24 ch 5,	abusePlease write more!
akiraYuan 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abuseclaps & whistles Nice. I read the Third Desire too. This one's just great. I'd give this a 5/5. Hahah... Am reading the next one. Akira
ysa-chan 2008-07-07 ch 5,	abuseI really enjoyed reading your first story "thrird desire", i just saw this today and it made me really happy that you're making a sequel...keep up the good work and pls update soon...
roseyangel52 2008-06-27 ch 5,	abuseThis is really good.
ElizabethMarieBennett 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abuseInteresting!
rose7anne 2008-04-26 ch 5,	abusehi this my first review. I really really like it... specially the thoughts of kyo... i cant wait to see the reaction of yuyu when she know how much he care for her.. I cant wait to see what will happen next please update really fast and keep it up thank you
Serena530 2008-04-09 ch 5,	abuseOh I am lovin this! Please tell me you have the next chapter written or is almost done or something? I so can not wait. I seriously want to know what happens next. Oh are we going to see Kenji again? I don't really care if we don't, but it all srated with him so I thought maybe... But it doesn't really matter. Please, please, please update soon. I will be eagerly(sp?) waiting. =)
Serena530 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseOMG! This chapter was hot! That's the Kyo I'm talking about. eyes with hearts in them No other story has done him justice in that 'deed' in all the fictions I have read. Oh and I can not believe some one watched them in the pond. I was like "oh! what a pervert!" and then I was like "I wonder who that is." LOL! Do I have my priorites mixed up in this chapter or what? I'm honestly not sure. LOL! Okay I'm movin on to the next chapter. =)
Biminigirl15 2008-04-04 ch 5,	abusewow i like the this one but i'm confused as to whats going to happen to yuya i guess i'll just have to wait and see like everyone esle great sequel so far
J-rocklover 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abusetee hee! this is a perfect sequil so far! I can't wait till you finish writing it. You are one magnificent author. Thanks for the story! ~ J-rocklover
crystaliz 2008-02-25 ch 5,	abusefinally! UPDATE! XD ty very much for the update. ^^ glad to see that u haven't forgotten us or the story. XP heehee. anyway, on to the review!! haha kyo has a HUGE ego and most certainly aggravates ALL his opponents with that 'i am worthier than thou' kinda attitude. i imagine he pretty much ** koga off in that fight of theirs. XD i just love it when u keep kyo in character. =D nice way of drawing out the fight... u're not much into describing the fight in terms of their actions and stuff but that's cool cos this way u bring out what u wanna show without it being overshadowed by the battle. ^^ and then in comes yuya... and as always she HAS to help kyo.. and her sense of hmm.. righteousness? stops her from doing it.. poor girl caught in her dilemma. ): so yuya tho. ^^ and omg i nearly thought she died there. >< i was thinking yuya can't die so easily!! wat will kyo do without her? >< and yay yuya lives! XD i rmb yukimura sanada's story.. (special bonus chapter in the previous story. XD ) i hope kyo manages to find some way to save yuya.. yuya can't die!! kyo'll be soo lost. >< yukimura MUST have some kinda solution!! D: it's cool that our baddie has some compassion in him. makes him seem just ABIT more human. ^^ still, he's a baddie who wants to get rid of kyo! >=\| but looks like he's formed some kind of attachment to yuya.. wonder whether this'll affect his future plans. hm. and wow... kyo acknowledges that he needs help! finally he admits some weakness. =P and yay the rest of the gang can come back! i've missed them! XD the last part was SOO funny. kyo is so cute! ^^ (scatterbrain XP )and what a good way to end off.. yuya and kyo's friendly banter. i missed it. ^^ (and kyo's such a miser lol. XD) all in all i liked this chapter (although it might've been a TAD short.. or maybe that's just me. XD ) and can't wait for the next one! i can feel it's building up for something BIG!! but take ur time if u're busy, i have patience. XP heehee. here's a cookie to keep u going!! ((: take care! ^^
Behan 2008-02-21 ch 5,	abuseyeah...you updated!!...it's been a while since the last one...but it's okay...anticipation is good for one self...wink ah...so that is what happen to Kouga...how sad and pitiful...first his family got kill...he was depressed for a while...until he found a family though the clan...but then Kyo came and kill them..but I have to point out though, Kouga is very lucky to be alive after encountering Kyo... so the guy who killed Kouga's family was the other one Kouga wants revenge on beside Kyo...but I wonder why Kouga didn't kill the guy who killed his family...why go after Kyo first??...unless Kouga already kiled the guy...but somehow I doubt it... Love the fighting scence...I can totally imagine it...big happy smile... stupid stupid Yuya!...first off should have listen to KYo...second should have pull the trigger...but no, she just couldn't do that...Kouga is so mean...stabbing Yuya when she could have shot him...I guess you can say that women are very in tune with their feeling...(paraphase)..."I can't kill him!...but I don't want him to hurt Kyo either"...yep a dilema there..I can totally understand why Yuya didn't pull the trigger...it's a woman thing...wink well...I have to give a bit credit to Kouga...he at least was doubting himself...but in the end he decided to stick with his plan...sigh...revenge won't get you anywhere, Kouga... interesting..."You will bloom like a rose during winter, Yuya-San...and, like a flower, you will wither away"...so Kouga put some kind of spell on her? NO!...I bet Kyo was screaming inside when he saw Kouga stabbed a unsuspecting Yuya...tears...I can imagine Kyo's raw feelings as he saw Kouga gently laying Yuya down...and her white yukata was now tinged red, blood red... and then...bam!!...Kyo took out the big gun...in this case, the big sword..."Mizuchi!"...I always love it when Kyo said, and let me quote, "You heard it too, didn’t you...the voice of the wind"...sighs dreamily... damn it!!...Kyo missed Kouga by mere inches...well I guess we can't have the evil villian to die so soon...I mean you still have about 20 or more chapters to go...wink wink what did Kouga do to Yuya??...No wounds?...a mystery, which I'm sure will be solve soon...because we can't have the main charcter woman be kill off now do we??...or else you're going to have a riot on your hands...and I will be the one who's leading it...wink...can't hurt Kyo...I just can't see him in pain... Kyo is so sweet...he was holding onto Yuya for half an hour...I guess he was making sure Yuya was fine and not dead...ha ha ha...Kyo is just so funny...afterwards he's done holding her...he roughly told her, “That’s it! Put some clothes on, woman"...ha ha ha...such a typical response from Kyo...but I love him for it though... ha ha ha...the calvary (Yukimura) and the babysiter (Benitora)...how cute...and Akira, is he by any chance, that one guy from the first story?...and if he is, I bet he will be the one who will work on the spell or whatever that was put on Yuya... ha ha ha...I just love the ending...Kyo threaten the hotel owner...ha ha ha...a very nice ending to end a sort of sad chapter...I lvoe it! so update soon!...can't wait to see all the gangs together again...so update!... I'll forever be here!
Jennipher 2008-02-20 ch 4,	abuseI was hoping that you would update this again! Thank you for update it and i can't wait for the next update!
Kaeru-sama 2008-02-20 ch 5,	abuseTowards the end, i liked how Kyo's goofy side came out. It was a pleasant surprise. Kyo's such a shameless forgetful person. Yuya's withering away? Aww. Wait, it means she's dying and not wither as in becoming old before she eventually dies, right? If that does happen...lol. Yeah, she does need a babysitter and Tora'd need Akira to babysit him and Akira gets Kyo before Yukimura takes care of them all. Yup, that's the cycle. Okay, that was good. Update soon! Cheers!

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