aw... I'm going crazy! I need to continue reading this or I will explode. Please update!

Sorry I've taken so long to review, but I got sick for two weeks and then took three weeks to catch up in school. Brutal huh?
These two chaptets were great. Oh Danny, his optimism is so cute. If only life was that simple.
Can't wait for more.

You sometimes I just don't wanna ead your updates, because they're going to lead me right into cliffies like thins one! D:
Okay...First Things first, Desire no please don't tell me she's dying! T_T That would be too much...still I do see it happening...but don't get any ideas!! Don't kill her, she's nice...
About Gregor, I just love him with the raw of my heart he's so cute! Elliot too I just hope they find more about each other, esp. Gregory :3
I'm so happeh you made Ember meet Elliot lol cuz I just imagine the scenne like that in my mind, somehow I knew they'd meet that way...but hey it's understandable, he's a really big kid x3...
Anyway Ruga, I don't know too much about her but she sounds like Elliot's fuure girlfriend, I'd like to see more of her too!! :D You write incredible girl! I really love your style! I feel like I'm there! Anyways...time to go, sorry for the late review, got exams
Ta for now!

Awesome chapter, I love your works, so well written!

origionally i thought the idea was interesting, but you are kind of just rambling on, i think you need to get more to the point, have you even started your main plot yet? in any case, you are a good writter, just you should condense your story *a bit*

Oh, well.

It looks like things are getting better and worse at the same time...

And it's just not Danny without his hero complex. He's such a sweet little kid.

Review rápido y en español!!
Yo, igual que el populacho, creo que Desiree está embarazada. Lo cual sería muy curioso tomando en cuenta que aunque Vlad pueda embarazar a alguien por ser mitad fantasma y mitad humano, ella no debería poder ya que es totalmente fantasma y no está diseñada morfológicamente para algo así. Eso o nos vas a dar una sorpresa. Si tiene que ver con su muerte... yo esperaba que Spectra la matara -ya sabes, algo más dramático XD
¿Por qué la gente te pregunta si Masters es Vlad? A mí me parece claro que son la misma persona -aunque desconozca las razones de esa naturaleza. ¿O me equivoco? O_o;
La escena de Vlad y Sam fue linda. Y no sé si lo hiciste a propósito, pero me recordó mucho lo que él sintió la primera vez que vio a Daniel. Al igual que con Sam, sus ojos fue lo que más llamó la atención de Vlad. Eso tiene que significar algo, ¿cierto?
El nombre de la abuela de Sam es Ida! Puedes verlo en Wiki. ¡¿De dónde sacaste el Milli?!
Mi favorito sigue siendo Gregor. Definitivamente amo cuando aparece él. ¡¡Y ya quiero verlo con Sam!! Tom puede ser muy frío, pero no es cruel con él. Eso me llama mucho la atención. Igual que con Skulker, Tom no quiso matarlo ni usarlo para experimentar cuando lo vio en el estado en que lo dejó Pariah. Es curioso, siendo uno de los villanos, que no sea cruel ni grosero, hasta me atrevería a decir que es amable con el niño -to some extend, you know. I like that, he's a interesting character.
Ok, see ya!!

Nice story! Hope you update soon!

THE CAKE IS A LIE!! XD

Anyway, I like it, and... oh my gosh it's 12:05! Hmm, hate where you leave off, but cliffhangers are a good literary device so I can't get mad at you. Um, yeah... It was so cute when they put Wulf to sleep XD Jes *nod* Quite adorable they are. *raises fist in air* And now I should get to sleep. 12:08 AM now XD

...You are so incredibly evil... :P

I love how many plotlines you always have twisted together into a wild and convoluted mess. It's completely amazing how you manage it. Awesome job, as always!

And Happy Birthday! But you told us the wish, so will it not come true now?

Uh oh, I think Desiree is in trouble now...hopefully it isn't as serious as she is making it out to be. The talk that Clockwork had with her makes me a bit nervous though.

I liked seeing Danny's plot to get their fathers back together. Too bad it doesn't seem like it would work now! Hearing about the psychic link was interesting too. I think that could be really useful later.

I can't wait to find out what happens next! Hopefully there isn't a fight in the dragon realm!

WHAT?! could you have picked a worse spot to pick? REALLY! how in the world is Elliot going to get out of this one! O.O I will go crazy with this! Danny sure is a trouble maker, he intruded into the dragon realm and brought Ember with him, not to mention he put wulf to sleep (haha I'm sure Vlad and Desiree will get a kick out of that) I think I'm going to like Ruĝa although she seems like A LOT of trouble? how do you manage to make the worse situations and find a solution... there is a solution right?


I'm very exited that Elliot can Communicate with Gregor, although Gregor seems more than a little reserved to opening up to him, mentally attacking him? that's a new one, I thought that the scene with the Dragonfly was very touching, I feel so torn inside because of the tragedy of Elliot and Gregor, Brothers ripped apart by the evil of their own kind (ghosts) Its really bad, I have no idea about how danny is going to amend his dad's relationship with Aragon.


And I really hope there is nothing serious going on with Desiree, I'm suspecting is something less... Dramatic than dying but at the same time something VERY unlikely that would blind them from realising.

Are we getting checkmate...? NO that's the least I need (lots of back work) but it is just SO addicting, both DoaS and Checkmate have been spicing up in this last chapters, Keeps me going. Anyways I'm almost done with a new pic of CM that I just started this week, really simple... and old since it refers to a couple or chapters back... hehehe I'm still trying to get the lighting right with it though. I shall go not, I need to study for a World History test tomorrow, then a geometry test on Wednesday and finally a biology test on Thursday, Fun (I had a bible test today too) its all about academics now a days, but that wont keep me from your wonderful stories, especially now that so many plot trends have been opened :D , there is much to speculate about!

Gotta go!
See ya in ...CM??

Ah it was your b-day yesterday! Happy Belataed B-day!

And another nice chapter for you! Even though you ended at that cliffy...

Either way, keep up the great writing!

pearl: Absolutely LOVED this chapter as much as I LOVE this story!! It's fast becoming my fav of yours! I thought the scenes with Vlad and Desiree were very touching and you did an excellent job of showing not only their love for each other, but also their emotional conflict of duty over that love. Very heart-wrenching, even when they know that they will do the right thing for the sake of their reace. BTW, tell your muse to LEAVE DESIREE ALONE! I was just as scared as Vlad when she blurted out that she thought she was dying! I hope she'll be all right!

Love the scenes with Danny in it, but I love ALL the scenes with Danny in it! I thought the way he and Ember got Wulf to sleep was hilarious! And so like Wulf to fall for it! Strong, yes. Smart, not so much!

My heart was also aching and going out to Gregor in his scene. The poor kid has suffered much too much for anyone, much less a child. Very upsetting and all I want to do is eliminate Tom (yeah, he brings out the darkest side out of me--but for justice's sake). Tom is a real cad and jerk and I hope he gets evaporated by something or someone.

Finally, I LOVED the scene between Elliot and Danny. It was terrific! You can see the friendship shining through all their objections. But, now, of course, there's that horrid cliffie! But, then, of course, I have no right to complain since I'm very fond of them myself! But still, now I'm worried that Danny will be in BIG trouble soon!

In any case, LOVED This chapter...and BTW, the cake was delicious... Happy Birthday again!! truephan

aww... poor gregory! :(