I like this a lot. Especially the end where Nanaki says that he wants to tell his children their tale.

Excellence. I particularly liked the ending bit with Nanaki, it brings a nice sense of closure to the story.

oh wow this is the most original story i've read. it brought tears to my eyes like the first time i played the game and then some not in a sad way but a happy way. i did'nt see this one coming but i love it.

ZOMG! That was wonderful!! Emo and happy at the same time! :D A wonderful combo, and I truly enjoyed it. Great work, my dear!