Reviews for Science in the Shadows

DrDamage
2008-01-05
ch 3,

abuseI love the story and I'm thoroughly enjoying it. However, It strikes me as unlikely that a detective would arrest people on such flimsy grounds. I realize it's probably plot driven (i.e. you need the scoobies in custody) but I find that sequence a little odd is all.

Also, I have trouble believing that the scoobies would have that discussion where a detective would overhear it.

I could find nothing else I didn't love about your tale.

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