 amore-amour 2009-12-31 . chapter 6I love this! :)
It's really well written~~ and the plot is really good too <33
I love angels ;) |
 SorasKey 2009-11-14 . chapter 6it's really weird, but when i read something really good, my stomach hurts. it's only happened once, twice before, but right now...my stomach hurts. in a good way. this story is so amazing and i hope you continue it. the namine/roxas moments are the best namine/roxas i've ever read. it's so...good. :)
~SorasKey |
 Aquamarinegirl1 2009-11-07 . chapter 6aw this is so cute, i love love love roxas to bits, C: please update soon |
 Lebrezie 2009-11-06 . chapter 6haha this was the cutest chapter ever!
especially the dimple part, that was absoutely adorable :)
anyway, at the beginning of the chapter, i was like "ohh i want them to kiss so bad, but then i thought that that wasn't possible, so then my mind went on this whole rampage about how they would go on this magical journey together so he could become solid again."
but then before i knew it they were kissing, and he was solid. and i was like, well that was easy, no magical journey required, yay!
haha
anyway, that was super cute. "I can make you smile"
yay, Roxas and his adorable-lishous-ness! haha
anyway, good job (really) on this chapter it made me smile (probably just as much as it made Namine smile) haha
update soon! peace! :) |
 Ikuto Loves Me More 2009-11-05 . chapter 6you updated yay!
and they kissed *O* thanks for this wonderful chapter ^^ |
 Handwritten 2009-11-02 . chapter 6Oh...wow! What a lovely kissing scene (though I guess that counts as making out, haha)
I felt all bubbly inside XD My brain pretty much melted. Great job!~
I've never heard that saying about dimples...but it works so well, so even if you /did/ make it up, I love it. Haha XD *fangirl alert*
Man...when Roxas turned back into the wisps of warmth, I sighed sadly. Really. I could read paragraphs about them kissing - seriously >.< I love your writing.
Hope you find the time to update again soon :) |
 Leonlover1515 2009-11-02 . chapter 6Good work. I'm really enjoying the story so far. Never really thought of Roxas as angelic before, but maybe thats because he was always so sad in the game. But anyway, keep it up, looking forward to the next chapter =] |
 Vani 2009-11-02 . chapter 6 Ahh! So good, I loved it! I hope the next update comes sooner thant the next one cause I can't even guess where this story is going next! |
 Fifi McFu 2009-11-02 . chapter 6Haha we updated our stories at exactly the same time XD I guess that proves we're sisters, great minds think alike.
Anyway, this was amazing Rhian. Like you said to me the other day, your writing really has improved tenfold since you last wrote a chapter for this fic. I loved all the little details, especially 'The ceiling had become a spot of contemplation', that was awesome :D And the kissing scene was very nicely written, very sweet and at the same time exciting because he materialised for an instant.
Awesome work, but you better update your other stories too now XD
Love love lil sis x |
 Fifi McFu 2009-10-22 . chapter 5Oi Chibi, I demand you write an update for this story. DO IT NOW. Forget I Kissed The Brain (lol that was a typo but its funny so I am going to leave it XD), this is my fave of all your stories, and I dont even like RoxNam fics! UPDATE I DEMAND YOU.
Gay. |
 Fifi McFu 2009-10-22 . chapter 1OMG you mentioned the legendary christmas candles :D I'm bored at work and thought I would read this fic you rave about in your profile :) |
 NoName 2009-10-09 . chapter 5 I love this story! You are an amazing writer and I think that a lot of people would like to see what happens in the end, myself included! |
 Ikuto Loves Me More 2009-09-22 . chapter 5WOW! I love this story please update soon |
 puppylovelovelove <3 2008-11-08 . chapter 5 omg omg omg! i rily love your story! its so kawaii! hope u update soon! |
 Annie Mae 2008-11-02 . chapter 5aww!! i really love your story!! the plot is so cute and sweet. :D
can't wait for the next chapter! :D |