wow. that was very detailed. good imagery too.

whats with kai?

I'M SO SORRY I DIDN'T REVIEW EARLIER! I'M SORRY, I'M SORRY! But Holy ** Kai is scary, I could see him slashing Dickenson, but smearing the blood and guts on his face, then KISSING Rei. Just 13 tads and 32 smidgens creepy. Now, I'm scared as to what Kai's going to do to REI now. He's all like "Rei not yet..." and if I were Rei, I'd be pretty farking freaked. Kai's going to go all ape **.

Sora! (is freaked)

Whoah! A cliffie! :O

But Mr.D died! \o/ That I can be happy about!

I have a ba a a a ad feeling about what Kai's gonna do to Rei. :{ (*whispers* Don't kill him!)

Okay, I know that humans are animals but... smearing brain-matter to his hair? That's not being an animal, that's being a psychopath. Because animals like to be clean if possible. Or use clean dirt to protect themselves. But using gore...? Ew.

Waiting for the next one! o/

Luv, reb

My goodness, Toaster-san! D= The horror! And what a misleading chapter title! Dx Well, at least Rei is safe. Guh, I do not like gore, so I skimmed the massacre. It was probably well described though! =D ?

Going to do a wrap up for chapter 6 and end it? Wow, 6 already...that was fast. You could always add more though! Good luck writing.

LOL, the title of the chapter is so funny now that im finished with this. Kai scares the crap out of me. poor Rei, Kai wouldn't ever hurt him would he? i could like see him getting all scary protective and biting off the hands of anyone who got to close...

So delightfully twisted. X3 There's something about Kai that strikes me as inexplicably adorable. Maybe it's the way he's so innocently juxtaposed in a horrible, gory scenario. XD

Tyson and Daichi could neither one stay there alone and not ** up. -> Neither one of Tyson and Daichi could stay there alone and not ** up. (or) Tyson and Daichi couldn't stay there alone and not ** up.
He stuck his other leg through, and slid-- (no comma)
Not even the missing limb could impede upon there happiness (their)
--would pay to have him a new leg regrown. (re-grown?)
You'll here a gunshot, and I'll be a while. (hear, maybe no comma, and is there something missing from that sentence?)
They had a wounded, wary looked that might never go away. (look)
Once they were out of side-- (sight? outside?)

Oh... They got Rei out... No, wait. They got to him, but they're not out yet. I just wish Kai could kill Mr.D with a one shot. That would be cool. Bullet between the eyes, or something. Otherwise I would say that a bullet to the stomach of liver or
somewhere else like that to cause a painful and slow death, but in this case, I don't want Mr.D to have the chance to survive.

But now I'm apprehensive... You won't have a villain in this if you kill off Mr.D... But kill him anyway! And get another villain if you need one, please?
*tries the puppy-dog eyes*
*stops to think*
*takes out a kitchen knife and takes a haunted look upon her*

Do it or else... (This might work better for you, huh?)

Luv, reb

OMG! i wanna, i wanna...ugh!! Mr. D is so evil in this! i hope Kai gives him what he needs!!

Wow... very dark fic. I quite like it. Lol, I thought it was kind of funny that Kai asked Rei to marry him in such a horrible place though. Hehe. Anyway, interesting time period...it sounds extremely futuristic to me..when does it take place?

Anyway, update soon.

Hey Toaster-san!

Boy, lots happened in this chapter. I would recommend a little more explanation on the hoverfield and the trek to Rei's place in general, as it isn't a thing or environment everyone would be familiar with right away.

Oh goodness...the leg... *wimpers and goes away*

I'm anticipating the next chapter. Good luck!

so. intense. it doesnt scare me as much anymore, but it still makes me nervous and all that jazz. im just happy that Kai and Rei are reunited and are getting married, but something's going to happen when Kai tries to kill Mr.Dickenson, I just know it. I do, I really do. I know I have to wait two weeks for an update, but I really think you should update sooner because I'm so special! ^_^

Sora!

please update soon...this is turning into a really good story. how will kai's reaction be towards rei? how will the others react? i am adding this to my fav stories list.

OKAY!!

You made me curious, KaiToaster-san! UPDATE FAST!!

Gyaa! You killed Tala! Can't believe it.. and Selma, too..

That's a good job, by the way. Just one protest, why didn't it longer?

Ha haa! I knew it! It's the boiler! Wow... Such suspence! I'm trembling~

Aw... Poor Tala and Brooklyn... (I don't know who Selma is.) That came as SUCH a surprise! They were dead. O.O Well, I wish good luck to Kai with the killing. May it be slow, painful and succeeding. (And may Kai not get caught.)

Luv, reb

P.S. Somehow I like it that Max unlocks the doors. Don't ask why, I just feel that it suits him. :D