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| attizzikah 2008-03-03 ch 1,  | abusei came in to this a little apprehensive - anything with sexual abuse makes me a little apprehensive, but you managed to pull it through without being disgustingly graphic or putting in unnecessary cruelties - i've always believed ibiki to be a man of honor, i'm glad you portrayed him as such - gai's character was believable and touching. good job. ^^. |
| Theri-chan 2008-01-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that was realy well written. Haven`t seen that pairing before, but wouldn`t mind seeing it again. Gai`s adorable...sometimes =P |