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Aloha.Laney
2008-03-14
ch 7,
abuseNice one!
I hate those telemarketers too!!
Why does Shino hang up? Ok, I would be annoyed too if somebody was shouting at me at the phone...
Anyway, get well soon!!
And continue writing soon!!
deepcutfighter
2008-02-16
ch 6,
abuseaw that's so sweet!
Teiana
2008-02-16
ch 6,
abusei love these! write more please!
TeenageCrisis
2008-02-16
ch 6,
abusehaha getting even better
People-Stare-I-Glare
2008-02-16
ch 6,
abuseAre you sure you don't marry reviews?Cause mine's pretty smexy!

Anyway good job although short they were very good reads.Plus i think short stories are better to read sometimes.I love the kakashi one and can't wait for another chapter maybe :D

well good luck

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Aloha.Laney
2008-02-16
ch 6,
abuseGreat one! Really funny!
I have to say that I guessed it was Kakashi when I read "Yo"...
But I really love this one!
It's a pity you don't get more reviews, I love these little stories! (I put a link on my site...maybe ;-))
Please write more lovely stories though!!
Aloha.Laney
2008-02-14
ch 5,
abuseNice one!
Thank you, I really liked it!
That was a close thing, Kiba! Just imagine the scene when he's not moving; it's so funny!
But don't let him take the camera... it's good blackmail material on it...!
Good work!
Please more as soon as you can!
Aloha.Laney
2008-01-06
ch 4,
abuseCute one!
I can Sakura understand though...
Really nice!
Aloha.Laney
2008-01-04
ch 3,
abuseTsk tsk... but a little cheating has to be allowed... and it's definitely beneficial if you get a kiss from Neji in return!
Great! Keep on going!
Aloha.Laney
2008-01-03
ch 2,
abuseI like it!
These are cute and funny stories!
Please more ;-)
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