Holy shnizzle! ::chucks fob watch at the Doctor::

you made me laugh so hard! thanks for the comedy factor

You make me want to hug John, lol.

Creepy hallways with sining? That would be freaky, lol ... unless the song was 'We Will Rock You!' lmao.

Haha, Rose has gotten herself a new boy toy!

Nice chapter, the polt is begining to thicken!

I loved it
never worry about long chapters
they are good !

interesting concept so far...although i do feel sorry for the Doctor. Things don't seem to be going well for Jack's mental state? Are Rose and Jack together in this one? Hope you choose to continue.

*grins like a carzy person* Now, THIS story should have been the script to Human Nature/Family of Blood.

Aw, is Jackie-boys upset coz he thinks the Doc will love Rose and not him when he becomes a Time Dork again? *hugs Jack*

Update soon!

AH I LOVE IT :D
I'm probably the slowest person in the World and when Jack was like: Oh My God I'm going to be a father!
I was like: ? *2 minutes later* OH RIGHT :D
Good stuff so far, keep updating

Really wierd but ok go with it
mAIRA

love this story so far can't wait for the next chapter.

This is a very intruging story. I love the JackRoseDoctor pairing, and I think this will grow into a very intresting fanfic. Did you say you needed ideas? Well, what are some normal problems in the early 20th centurary? But the Doctor`s not exactly normal, is he? What if John walks in on Jack and Rose when they`re kissing? That would ensure awkwardness...

Interesting.