   the curious incident 7/13/09 . chapter 1So adorable and cute. Innocent Lianne tries her hand at subtle, or maybe not so subtle, seduction and innuendo! Well written. |
| Silvermoon of Forestclan 3/6/09 . chapter 1 Funny! Poor Alan.-Silvermoon |
| claire of queenscove 9/22/08 . chapter 1 Cute) |
| Anaroriel 1/29/08 . chapter 1 Completely adorable and funny. Nice work. Only two things, cluelessness is one word I believe, and adoreable should be adorable. Little minor stuff. Anyway, very cute! Good work! |
| sophia666 1/26/08 . chapter 1 Great one-shot.I love this pairing. *hugs it* though there isn't nearly enough of it. Great writing. Happy midwinter. |
| Mage of Dragons 1/3/08 . chapter 1 hehehe... that was really cute! |
| Kairi's-twin 1/3/08 . chapter 1 hahaha that was so cute. Good job I loved it. Alan is soo obliviious some thimes. the last line is great!
Kairi's Twin |
| Madame-S-Butterfly 1/2/08 . chapter 1 Definitely not your oh so typical story in which boy meets girl under the mistletoe. It was very well done. I love seeing minor characters. |
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