Wow! This is such a wonderful poem! So chilling and so..DEEP! I like the fact that this is written in Keira's POV, though it might offer a few spoilers in Jak 2, I'm concerned. Her reaction to Jak was suprising: It was a bit OoC for her, not to mention it was mean/cold. But its written in the game that way so, eh, what can you do? XD The part where she mentioned Errol as the "other hero" was a bit strange. He doesn't SAVE the world, he DESTROYS it! Get some common sense Keira! Her comparision between Sandover and Haven was good, very descriptive and engaging. Keep up the good work! You are a brilliant author!

crap i missed another of ur works! i have got to stop doing that ...
great poem, its not without ur poems lurking about!

*salutes* *knocks self out accidently*

*sniff* man... i luvs it!

Poor keira... Poor Jak!

:) S S and Freddie