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Reviews For: Mischief

Miss_K 2008-07-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh fantastic little set of events! Loved it, was bored out of my mind at work and this totally put a smile on my face! thanks ^^
Lucas McDrake 2008-07-15 ch 1,	abuseSO IMPROPER! Fran NAKED, Basch NAKED, Penelo actually PRANKING, Ashe actually WANTING to see Basch NAKED, and the list goes on and on! It is slightly funny-I'll give you that!
Bullet in the Brainpan Squi... 2008-07-07 ch 1,	abuseI was wondering where Basch had went. lol. I also like Balthier and Fran dancing in the water.
AkeriAerkix 2008-07-01 ch 1,	abuse:D My jaws hurt from smiling so much! I've read this before I started posting and actually paying attention to the author names, I loved it then and I still love this. I love how everyone pitched in to ruin the party. :D Fran being naked threw me off there, cause I read it wrong and thought it was Ashe. 0.o I had to reread that part again. :D Pushes Balthier over there faster Now, I wasn't expecting Basch to be tied up, I was expecting him to be in on something, perhaps another joke that was directed towards her but that scene... So tempting to draw at the moment...Very tempting. Like Basch would break the pole to get free anyway...You know he wanted to stay. :) Loved this, I really do. Can't help but smile when I read it, puts me in a good mood everytime.
Miss Famke 2008-05-30 ch 1,	abuseHey! I know I read this, looks like I forgot to review... DANG IT. I love your funny stories, they are like candy! better than chocolate really, and coming from me, that means ALOT. Poor Ashe all her friends ruined her party, omg each little person doing each prank was hilarious. I guess, the biggest prank of all turned out to...errm...make her night, eh? That was more of a present than a prank! Hahahha LOVE THIS!
aorin 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abuseWhat would Ashe do without friends like these? ;) I guess the most pitiful of all is the poor naked ex-Dalmascan captain that was strap tightly, handcuffed to a bed post... (hold it, did I just hear a choir of angels singing 8D). Ah~~ the glorious image of Basch without a stitch on him, writhing on a bed post!! At least the helm did some good for a change ;D (I can almost hear Noah screaming, "You use my helm to do what?") Wonder if the party left them some "questionable" items for them to peruse? You know, leather straps, metal chains and all that XD ... Pretend I didn't say that... Eheh, I bet Ashe will be looking forward to next year's New Year celebration. Imagine if Ashe was the present this time!! XP I demand part two XD I think Ashe will be willing to put up with any kind of pranks if it means getting the reward in her bedroom ;) And Basch, oh you sly captain, while you might seem like the victim, clearly, you could have broken away and fled, but since you didn't, obviously, you are actually more willing than you care to admit ;3 Luckily, it's a public holiday the next day. You both are probably too exhausted to work anyway, well, that is if you are actually willing to leave the room in the first place XD
Laguna's twin sister 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abuseO_O I did not just read that. HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA! Oh gods. That was so funny. I... I ... I have no words. HAHAHHAHA. NAUGHTY! hhahaha, but it was funny. thanks, I needed that.
Earisu 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abuseLOL!! Those friends of hers... the nerve! You absolutely rock in humourous stories... nice New Year's End XD Poor Ashe... the friends she has. Tss tss. Poor Basch! I was reading that letter and I was guessing they had done something of the sort with him. But what you've done with the helmet... LOL! I am glad that everything turned out fine... or so it seems. And go tell Vaan and Penelo to peek at somewhere else! They must give the lovebirds some privacy XD Sorry about this non-constructive review... overall, I loved this oneshot :)
Silvara 2008-01-02 ch 1,	abuseHey. T_T That was... Err. Well. Making honest citizen at a loss of words. Shame on you. Let say it was 'surprising'. Okay, the surprise having passed over, I'll try to criticize it seriously. But no guaranty. X) (I knew I should have suspected something when Fran had removed her garments! I'm not the quick witted one, am I XP) The only thing that I may say is that I think Ashe reached her room too quickly for the surprise effect to be at his best. Beside, I find the fic a little too short for my liking, through I approve of the moment you choose to end it. I'd have found it perfect as a drabble .
Midnight's Falling Star 2008-01-02 ch 1,	abuseHahahaha! That was priceless! Kudos to you! That was quite enjoyable. Oh, I laughed so hard at the end. And I liked the part with Balthier and Fran (Love BalFran!) I thought it was cute. Well, I just left out the thought that she was no longer clothed. Haha. But anywho, it was cute. And funny. Way to add some spice to New Year's, eh? Hahaha. :) -Ariel.
landis icelilly 2008-01-02 ch 1,	abuseLOL, that was a good one! I think this one might be better than the other one you did! I loved it! I don't really see Larsa or Fran being the type that would take part in a prank like that, BUT... I can totally see Larsa doing it if the influences of Vaan and Balthier are present. Fran, well... I guess she just has a naughty side that not very many see ;) Now the scene in Ashe's bedroom has got to be priceless! I would give anything to see that! XD And what Penelo says at the end... finished it nicely lol! Awesome job! I'd like to see more of these from ya! They are so entertaining! XD Oh, did I mention that you are a very talented and spectacular writer? :D ~~ landis icelilly ~~ ~*~

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