Great work, I love the way you incorporated God into your story =D It is very creative, well done!

Your spelling is once again fine, its just that the grammer is a bit jot note like.

Wonderful message, its amazing to find out that God is using to spread the word of God!

May God Bless You and continue to use you in spreading his word to the unbelievers! =D

Interesting work.

The poetry in this chapter was very unique, seems original...I like it.

Spelling is fine, but the grammer is just a bit off.

Nice work though

great story plz put episode 11 up

Love this story!Post more!

No surprises there. It is indeed a Salt and Light Story. Before it was just a story now it's more than a story. If I have read a Christian fanfic before, and it doesn't have that effect on me it means there is no saltiness and lightness.

This one proove me wrong. Please continue to write. I support you in anyway. This is what Christian Fanfics is all about.

I'm really sorry, but I'm so disappointed. I can't read this sorry anymore.
It was great and everything.. but then... it was like WHAM! I'm reading a Christian novel. Don't get me wrong i respect your religion and your views and I have nothing against people who or Christian or any kind of religion, but that whole last chapter (the Greatest Gift of All) was really disconnected from the story. Usual there's some sort of sign that there's a religious issue, like accepting Jesus into your heart comes up prior to it.
I can't read anymore because I feel like the story lost it's direction, that and the fact that i felt as if Christianity was being shoved down my throat(primarily because it came out of nowhere).
The story was great and you had a great way to end it without bringing in religion. I'm sure someone would have known sakura was the card mistress, especially Kero who would have talked to Syaoran (would still be trying to hear what the only way to get out of his marriage was, instead of letting it drop)
I'm really sorry if i offended you with this review because i didn't like the religion in the fic. I'm submitting the review more so to point out that that last chapter was really disconnected and if you were going to make it a religious fic then to have the religion in more chapters prior to this one.

P.S yes I have read Christian novels and have not had a problem with them.

i like you to know that your christian fanfics are very inspiring. Reading stuffs like this made me cry cause i realized that i wasn't that a good christian, and despite of it, Jesus still loves me. a proof is that He had called me back to Him through your fanfics. God bless ate chette!(^_^)

Okay heres the thing Im all for christianity and such but it really just doesnt fit into your story I mean it was just better before can't they bond over a old place they saw or something and say im sorry and I love you and stuff like that It would be very good and it would be something non christians could read I mean I love god and I support you in writing about him just make it fit the story and I apologize if i am overstepping my boundarys
best of luck with your story(s)
-Kinomoto232
:)

wow this is truely a wonderful story, my eyes were watery the entire time reading it...plz update^^

Nice story i loved the peoms did you mske it yourself??
g2g

This is a cute and cool story. Please continue. Sakura and Syaoran forever.

Please update soon! I like it!

OMG! IM CRYIN! CAN U BELIEVE THT? I M CRYIN! AH!
*grabs hanky and blows*
AH!
TEARS ARENT GOIN AWAY!
AH!
*ahem*
good story...
*sweatdrop*

oi..! You didn't update for almost a year... what's your reason, huh? huh? *sad face* you stop just when things get interesting... But oh well..! This story's great... so don't even think about stopping to write... *pretends to be angry*

Yihee! It's christmas again..! Many food..! vacation..! And SOMEONE will update their story..! *Hint: Her penname starts with 'ChanChan'*

You're a Filipino, right? I read that somewhere... er... one of your author's notes... Your profile really didn't say it... It just said that you're a JesusFreak... er... I am not exactly a JesusFreak, but I am a christian... so what church do you go to? Btw, I'm a Filipino too..! Ü

I think I like you already... err... not like like in that way... just... like... I really hope you continue this fic... It's a great mix of religion and sorcery... I think you should do a harry potter fic...

M... what else... uh, yeah... Try listening to hillsong songs... they're great..!

M... That's all for now... I guess... Merry Christmas! God bless and take care... btw, I hope we could be friends... and I hope you really are a Filipino... I'm having a hard time to speak in english... :p

Note: I am not going to upload any story here anymore. If you want to read the rest of these stories, go to my profile to see the url of my fanfics. Thank you :)