I really enjoyed this story! but I do feel like it could have ended after the chapter where they get married. The story seems to lose focus after that point, since the whole development was based on Hyde's attempt to get Jackie back, and then after the wedding it seems like the story was too drawn out. There wasn't really much of a plot and it was a very loooong falling action. Now don't get me wrong, for the most part it was really well written, and I enjoyed all the extra fluff that came after the wedding. It just didn't seem completely necessary. I think you could have shortened it with an epilogue and have called it good. Regardless, I loved it! This is probably my favorite version of Steven yet!

Great story. Write more J/H. This was good.

I really adore your story. It had the perfect amount of fluff and angst, completely brilliant. Thank you so much for writing it. I rarely ever cry but the last chapter had me tearing (dogs are my soft spot)but I believe I understand why you wrote it. Besides the fact that all wonderful things must come to an end, you emphasized the strength of the Hyde family and I thought that was really important. Really great job and I'll be sure to look at your other stories. Oh and I'm a Psych major so I really enjoyed your analysis throughout the whole story :)

I managed to hold back the tears all the way until through this story until here. I have a real soft spot for pets I guess.

Anyway this was great work, and I like how you developed their children. Also it didn't just end as one big happy family, but they had issues and problems and lose where they needed to work together through.

Also I like the idea of Hyde and Jackie liking each other before the whole dating Kelso. And I like how you actually made a small relationship between them rather than just a physical attraction only.

He loses zen way more than just in the "Jackie Bags Hyde" Episode, though it is the first I believe...

sorry I didn't review on previous chapters, but this story is great and I think you did a good job of keeping the characters

All time favorite J/H story I've ever read. And let me tell you I've read ALOT of J/H & That '70s Show fanfics. I wish you'd continue writing T7S stories. You're VERY talented. What you've done with the characters is amazing. I could really see all this happening after the show ended. GREAT story!

I have never EVER cried from fanfiction but you really made me break down and lose it tonight. My only complaint is that Hyde didn't stay by Zep's side during the final moments, she just got carried out of sight. For someone that means that much to him, he should have been right there until the bitter end.

Thank you so much for making a neat bow out of the shambles that the writers left us all with.

yea cause danny is so much stupider than jagur

idk construction doesnt really turn me on... but it might some, just not my cup of tea

thoroughly enjoyed this amazing fanfic. I wish that the writers had been smarter and had Jackie and Hyde end up together or that they would have cut out all the stupid drama with Sam and the kelso misunderstanding. Great job! Only "criticism" i have is, watch out for spelling mistakes, grammar errors and misuse of vocab [don't think some of the words are real words].

Sorry about the lack of reviews over the last few chapters!

I can't really think of a lot to say about the ending.

I loved it like I've loved the rest of the story.

The whole Zep part has me bawling. It's just so sad to lose a pet like that.

So admittedly, not a big fan of that. I didn't really see it coming. Should have, I suppose.

Way sad! But I'm calming down now.

Anywho

Sorry that this story's over.

I'll probably go read your others now!

So cute! I'm glad it turned out to be a girl. Can't imagine what Hyde has for a nickname though.

I adore this fic! I also love the way you really focus on the core characters and not a ton of OCs. A few to really like is great, but I hate when there's more OCs than there are canon characters. I also really love the name you went with. xoxo HippieDippie

I just adore J/H, and the way you write them is freakin' awesome. I'm just going to pretend that this was the real ending and they just never aired it.

You make me want to listen to country music . . . most of the time I hate country music.

Anyway, I love this story, Steven is awesome :D

Catch ya later.