bout time a good sango/ miroku kiss scene like it i u and i have read all of the books omg the masquerade is soo twisted u think people are dead and they're charles force adopts some one and blies mom may not be who she thinks it is omg i lit u have torad it i did't even think of it as a vampire story just mre of withes it alborates eir powers more and how use them and all

Awe...I think Sangoa dn Miroku makea cute couple! Actually, though I've read fanfictionf or a while adn I've watched Inuyasha for I don't know HOW long, this is the first Inuyasha story I have read. Really cute1 I like it! :)

Aw! Thats really cute! MirokuxSango forever!

It's good but Edward Houshi's right. It does lack description. I'm just starting too so don't worry, I know how nervous you get when you click the little upload and review buttons. Just keep writing because I think you enjoy it. The more you write the better you get so update soon! (and loose that insecurity)

sucked? are you crazy? it was really good. and i thinkses that you should post more! :]

i thought it was fantabulous! (and i'm not just saying that b/c i wuffs u) any way do listen to those negative comments! :*

Hey! guess who! ... No answer well then Its Gaara or Michelangelo THE PARTY DUDE! Or Raphael Sam still hasn't stole him *dose evil laugh and hugs Raphy figure* So Kakashi hows life? I mean with Naruto it cant be fun with that kid... sometimes I just want to do sand coffin or just kick his ass! W- what am I saying! Naruto's my best bud! Well anyways I was just going through my reviews and saw yours and thought oh what the hell might as well. Well anyways I wuves you!

Not trying to be mean... But it lacked description, and was completely predictable. Most of the characters were ooc, and you needed to slow down. Try describing the surroundings, or the reasons behind the character's actions.

cute! perfect inspiration for me to write my own mir/san fic

Keep up the good work!

Ookami Hime Suriya

Aw love them. And it didn't suck, it was cute. Very cute. Great job!

it was short and a little half written... but it was a good idea and had the potential to be a great story! it was worth the read...

I liked this fanfic _

It didn't suck. Don't worry. I thought it was great (although it has been done several times before) :) But yours is different and the ending was kawaii. Keep writing, I'd like to see what else you've written.

AW! SO KAWAII! I LUV IT! _

nice story, update soon.