PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE I SEQUEL! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! Amazing simply amazing. Roy REALLY screwed up.

This was so good!You can't leave me hanging right there!It's not nice!Well to be simple what I'm trying to ask is, sequel please!?

O_O! I can't believe Roy did something so despicable! I always knew he was a power hungry sonofabitch but I never dreamed he'd sink so low! wow... I feel so bad for Ed. Is there any chance that a sequel will be happening any time soon? I have to know what exactly Hakuro did to Ed. (Fears the worst.) I'm also curious about what will happen to Roy now. His career looks to be quite dead now and I doubt there's anyway he can even remotely talk his way out of this one. I can't help but wonder what fate will befall him now. He's made quite a spectacular mess of everything hasn't he and he has no one to blame but himself. Damned shame Ed has to suffer being made a fool of and suffer ridicule and scorn because of his greed. :( Here's to hoping for a sequel! :)

...damn...if i was ed mustang would no longer be living or a man...what a stupid, pathetic bastard that for some reason i feel sorry for but i don't know why. ...this just sucks al around, the story is great, i love it...but mustang sucks. ^_^

Please right a sequel. PLEASE!

That was SO not a oneshot. It doesn't stand alone. So NYAH.

OMG! I'M GOING TO MURDER YOU IN YOUR SLEEP! you told me it was a cliffy...but I didn't think it was THAT bad! ARG! *cries* XP
Oh well now I have something ELSE to be on you about...hehe ^,.,^

Sequel Sequel please please write a sequel I really want to know what happens becuase this one-shot was really good!! :D

AH i need a sequel to live!
perverted general, roy should set his precious manhood on fire.
BWAHAHAHA.
and ed should forgive roy. though, mind you, NEVER forget.


ARGH basically, SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL.
there, i said it three times, this works like beetlejuice, right?

please write a sequel...I'll give you cupcakes ^_^

this story is one of the best i have ever read and i have read alot (i sound bid headed)you can not just leave it here i want to know if roy and ed get beck to gether i thing they should they are so cute so PLEASE write a SEQUEL

PLease? i woudl LOVE a sequel! and this was AWESOME

DO ANOTHER OR YOU'LL SE! Oh, and why didn't you do the rape with more detail? (sob) Why?! Oh, well. Do another and i'll give you a plate of jelly. Put rape scenes if you're feeling generous, please...

Please write a squeal!! Please! it was so good!

Damn. This was horrible. Wah! T__T I could feel Edward's humiliation when he found out! Gah!
Roy was most likely put in jail, right? -sheepish laugh- (Having a love for this pairing would make me a pedo too right??) -another sheepish laugh- ^^;