I liked the simplistic style it was written in, yet there was so much underneath the surface (that's what I saw anyway). Believe me, you're not the only who's tired of Quinn/Logan. It was cute at first, but now it's just...ick.

Aww, that was dark but it was romancey in a way. I'm glad you're still alive, lol. Could you do me a huge favour and read the new oneshot I wrote. It's called 'Rain'. I also have Part One of a DL threeshot out called 'Easy AS ABC'.

Thanks so much.

You know you're good when you write. I don't have to tell you that )

-Erika

Who's the girl? Is it Lola?

Loved it anyway as always, I just wish u'd ease up on the cursing!

Cursing doesn't make good writing, imagination does!

That was written amazingly.

It just got the message out.

It's making me think and wonder who's p.o.v it's from.

Anyway, I loved it.

Xx Tohru x Seraphina xX

-pounce tackles out of nowhere-

YOU'RE STILL HERE!

Absolutely brilliant. The insight and the utter simplisity yet elaboration (is that a word?) of the whole thing was just...wow.

-Lani x3 you!

That was really well written.

It didn't have to explain much and I got the whole message and everything that was happening.

I love the third person and having no idea who she (maybe even he) might be, it keeps me thinking which I really enjoy:)

Great use of description, loved the last line.

A great story, loved it :)

I would've reviewed this earlier, but the review button wasn't working.

Not kidding about that, either.

Really liked this. I haven't been into DL lately, but I like this.

Nice to know you're alive, too. I was getting a bit worried there.

-Rachel

Nice. I always love angst and you always write it well.

I have to say that I really like that you wrote it through the eyes of an anonymous third person and gave absolutely no hint to who that person could be as far as established characters (I don't think at least). It's as if it's saying it can be anyone, because it can be really. I've actually had two guys I've know try and make me their escape girl, I've never been willing to settle though so I've never been her, but they always found other girls to take the place of the one they really wanted. Because people do stupid stuff like that; hide, deny, substitute, and settle. It's like an unhappy pattern too many people live in and why not these people too? Just because they're fictional doesn't mean they deserve a happy ending where they don't get caught up in the web they set up for themselves at some point when fear outweighted every other feeling.

That being said and it being nice to see the depressing state of reality reflected in fiction, I'm still going to pretend that Logan ditches or Dana notices that she catches his eye and logically concludes that he can't be that into the girl he's actually with so she pursues him despite his current relationship status. I'm very possibly just a sucker for a happy ending, but it's nice to see one somewhere sometimes, so screw it.

Ah, and that leads me to what else I love about this story: the possibility. Because it could be real and Logan and Dana could remain apart, or-based on the desire and imagination of the reader-the true end for them doesn't have to be there. Brief, open-ended, and yet meaningful all at the same time. I think it must be said, you have once again achieved perfection.

Sincerely,

Sarah

P.S. I'm still around too and will be updating stories eventually as well. School, school, and more school created a great delay, but I'm currently finally making progress, I swear. And I'm so looking forward to your updates whenever they may come:)

who's P.O.V. was this told from?