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jes
2009-11-03 . chapter 4
wow...this story was a little intense sexually for me, but HOT! And I think you did a wonderful job of really capturing the character's personalities (especially Willow and Anya). Great job!
Munchichi
2009-10-02 . chapter 1
Naked Spike is good things. Anya is so funny in this. So far I like this alternate universe.
creativelove7
2009-09-20 . chapter 4
omg...this was absolutely adorable! it gave me shivers!! :D love love love it! the characters where so great!! ur amazing!
Miss Late Bloomer
2009-08-27 . chapter 4
Hm, let me guess...not a fan of Angel? I think he's all right, but I never thought him and Buffy made a good couple, or were together for the right reasons. Spike and Buffy's coupling, as presented on the show, was messed up, but I felt that they had potential that was never really explored, hence my interest in them in the world of fanfiction.

I do love your take on them, you write them so lovingly, both as individuals and a couple. Both are in character, even as you tap into places the show didn't or perhaps couldn't. The sex scenes were, fantastic, I do like a steamy story, I must confess. However, what's truly amazing is that the non-sexual aspects were just as good. The dialogue was by turns touching and hilarious, and I had a ball reading it.

I also like the introspective side of Buffy, how she can acknowledge the past, and understand it, want to move on from it. I'm actually someone who liked Riley, but he was obviously the rebound guy, it was doomed to failure. So, this story is a credit to you, and I definitely want to read more from you.
The Brat Princess
2009-08-02 . chapter 4
Hello there. I added this little gem to my favorites list a while back but never reviewed which is quite hypocritical of me considering I hate it when others do that with my stories.
I hope this will make up for my tardiness.
I love this story
1) Because you have Buffy vieing for Spike's attention. A nice twist.
2) It made me lol so hard in places, the stand out being when they walked in on the naked couple.hehe
3) You kept everyone in character, even those that didn't feature that prominently-Anya.
4) It was so romantic and the sex was HOT!
All in all-unmissable Spuffy.
Brat~
Sasunaru101
2009-05-05 . chapter 4
Loved it!
Shadowhawke
2008-12-30 . chapter 4
Wow. I wasn't expecting such a breathaking ending, but there it was. I loved the simple, beautiful and effective contrast in the snow between Angel and Spike, and I adore how hilarious the group's walk-in was, especially Dawn's reaction. Yet another gem from you. :D
Shadowhawke
2008-12-30 . chapter 3
Wow. That was hot. What can I say? You write these scenes amazingly. Not to mention that the switching of control felt very in-character and very right. :D
Shadowhawke
2008-12-30 . chapter 2
Oh, that was beautiful. I love how you explained Spike's blindness and hesitation in this chapter - it also made for some wonderful suspense. And the honest talking scene was, as always, sheer brilliance. Can't wait to read the rest!
Shadowhawke
2008-12-30 . chapter 1
Heh, I love your take on this - a Buffy running after Spike for once. That's pretty incredible, and very funny and well done here too. :D
scenexchick
2008-12-13 . chapter 4
That was incredibly breathtaking. omg the lemon was so perfect. Not even that tho, u fit the characters better than any other author did! that was simply amazing. ugh and it was funny as hell =] i luv how u made anya it was dead on. i will so be reading whatever next story you make. This is actually the very first spuffy ive read where u focused a bit more on him being a vampire. Its like most stories forgot that yummy lil part or something. I really liked how they claimed each other. omgosh i just loved all of it!

Sylistra the scholar
2008-12-07 . chapter 4
Okay Buffy Fan for years and I just started watching the show on DVD a few weeks ago...and I sorta developed a huge crush on Spike. And I always preferred him over Angel cause well...I like Billy Idol and the Lost boys was my favorite movie back in the day so naturally Spike always appealed to me. Anyway read this story-this chapter like thirty times because I laughed so hard. My family is uncomfortable with me reading explicit stories so I had to be very vague about it and they thought I was insane, but it was worth it.

The characterization was absolutely flawless- I could see this as an actual episode. Honestly and I love your Spike, like wow he is hilarious. Anyway excellent story, probably one of the funniest I have ever read.
xScottx
2008-09-10 . chapter 4
It was great, eh I'll read all your stories again in the future that I am sure of.
xScottx
2008-09-10 . chapter 3
good chapter
xScottx
2008-09-09 . chapter 2
Eh good, good, good. Funny to - about to have sex and they talk about some weird shit but hilarious. I gotta stop reading tonight my fucking mouth hurts from laughing/smiling or whatever.
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