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| Jim 2008-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou played around with the official time line, but excellent none the less |
| statler 2008-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseSERIOUSLY?!?! How can you live with yourself leaving the story there?? I want more!! More, more, more!! . . . Please? |
| Greys has become my life 2008-01-28 ch 1,  | abuseWHAT?!? Wow, what an ending! And by ending, of course I mean "ending" because really it is just 1/3 or 1/2 finished. There is definitely at least another chapter left in this awesome story! |
| adpacaus 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseExcellent dialog. Very real. But what an ending. No matter what universe poor Annabeth gets stuck with delivering bad news. :-) Hope you write a sequel. |
| catgurl83 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed the story but I must say I was bummed when I got to the end. We don't get to see how Leo handles being President? Or how Josh deals with all that has happened? I really hope you'll consider writing a sequel! |
| AEM1 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseOMG that was incredible. I loved all the rants, like Lou's at the end...I don't even know what to say, your story was amazing. All the characters were perfectly in character...Brilliant! Loved! Keep up the good work! I'll be keeping an eye out for your stories! :-D |
| VidaliaGirl 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseHey Jayne, Great story! Please, please, please write a sequel!! :) We didn't get to read how Donna saw Josh after the surgery. I'm also curious about the McGarry administration. Tyler |
| West Wing Fan 2008-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW, This was great and intense. Please write more soon! |
| Galindafied 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseWow! I was not expecting this to be good, but boy was I suprised. The fic was well balanced using charachters from both administrations, and the way it was written kept me on the edge of my seat. Are you going to write a sequel? McGary as president is bound to be interesting... |
| Mark 2008-01-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm glad to see that this says Chapter 1, please post more of it soon. |
| Jim 2008-01-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story. I hope you will find the time to write a follow up on the new McGarry administration and the difficulites they will face. Thank you! |
| liz 2008-01-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey I really liked the premise of this story and the interaction between the two camps. But that is where you choose to end it! My eyes welled up upon hearing the news and then I had to read THE END! Come on! I look forward to reading a continuation of this story. It has a lot of promise. Can't wait. |
| MissDevon 2008-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abusehow could you kill him!?!?! |
| jdauber 2008-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat a great ending- never expected |
| Sharon 2008-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou are going to write more aren't you? Please, Please... |