not right! this story is too long!

Aww, that was a beautiful ending! It's strange, it's really nice to see the end of this story, but it's also sad to see it end in a way too. It really was a great trip though.*blushes at the compliments in the last chapter* Aw, you're most welcome. Congratulations on completing this lovely story! I look forward to your future works.

Gah! I'm so sorry I haven't left a review in so long! I've just been terribly forgetful and I could have sworn I had this story on my "Alert" list...but apparently that's not the case, and I apologize again for not reviewing the last chapter you uploaded as well. O_o

Anyway, these last two chapters have just been fantastic, the fast-paced action coupled with the fear the characters are experiencing of either being discovered or just plain not knowing what will happen next is so real. I've been on the edge of my seat the whole time. Ash's final sacrifice was really beautiful as well, him and Pikachu going in a blaze of glory to save Jacob. Amazing story-telling! I honestly can't wait to see what happens next, especially since it seems that now, everything connects...Jacob went back instead of forward in time, and now Ash (the present Ash, who's viewing this memory) knows what's happening. Brilliant! I truly can't wait for the next chapter! Please please please keep going with this story!

...And sorry again for not reviewing sooner. ;

*cries* That's so sad! Poor Samara! Poor Jacob! And what happened to Gary and Ash? I hope they're okay! *worries* Please keep going with this! I can't wait for the next chapter!

that last chapter really creeped me out in a good way. when i saw this story updated again i was really happy. i always did like it. hope you update again sometime soon.

Gah! I'm sorry I took forever to review! In any case, I'm so glad you have another chapter up! And now we know how Jacob got both his hat and Eevee! Really cool! It's nice to see Gary again as well. Please continue! I really love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep going please!)

YAY! I'm so glad you updated! Anyway I really liked this chapter! Could the pokemon researcher they're visiting on that island be...Tracey? I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep going!

this story is very well writen and i couldnt stop reading until i was done. you have to update cause we all want u to and its worth it. so please update soon.

WOW!

Cool story! Please continue soon!

Yay! New chapter! Aww...poor Ash! I feel so sorry for him! I'm rather bummed myself seeing as how Misty has left the show in the new pokemon season. Course they did give her a very nice send off. Really good emotional stuff. You know, like, gooey gooey gooey lovey goo! At least they left it that she might come back to the show. Anyways, I'm so glad that you updated! Please continue!)

Too lazy to log in… still, it is my name on the site too...
Really good, read it all at once so I didn’t miss anything… only took me an hour and 45 min. Did you know your story is, like, really, really, REALLY long? I only copied and pasted about… well, from the chapter where Jacob gets mad and destroys the evil shadow thingies… (why can’t I remember what they were called! Curse my short term memory!) yeah, my parents were all like, “You’ve been on the internet long enough!(Why do they always say that? Maybe cuz it’s true…) I have a little brother named Jacob! And sometimes we call him Jake! But he’s way different. For one thing he’s not from the future… But I won’t like, copy your story cuz #1, it’s not on my computer anymore, and #2, I could never pass it off as mine because it is way, way, WAY, too good. Read my stuff, it all sucks. But that kind of sucks cuz I was kinda planning on doing a story with a demented 7 year old girl from the future… but it’s different! So don’t get mad at me! Strangely enough I’m not even online right now and I’m just gonna post this tomorrow… but it’s 9:00 pm, so I need to go tell my little sister that she needs to go to bed… Oh well, I’ll leave her alone… this is too much fun… Why, oh WHY did you make Misty die? (Hey, I’m a poet and I didn’t know it! lol) At least, when you think about it, it’s AAML… I have forever and ever and ever and ever before I send everybody to bed! (Okay, so it’s only about 30 min, but that’s okay) Off the story track again… Wow. Three years? Wow. Candy canes are good… (I have the attention span of a… well, something with a really, REALLY short attention span!) I feel so sad that you only had the same ppl reviewing… *sob* at least I’m new! And yes, I AM READING YOUR STORY! AND WILL BE READING IT FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER! (Or at least until it’s finished. And think about it this way. If I went the same way I am now, with the whole, “about three reviews per story” kick, I’d have to write… a really big number of stories to get as many as you have on this one!) Man this is long… KINGDOM HEARTS RULES! Ibeatthegame,ibeathegame,ibeatthegame… okay, that was random. It just popped into my head and I wrote it down… you probably don’t want to read anymore of this… and… SAMARA IS COOL! What’s up with her dad? He’s like, totally in denial! (One friend and the talk rubs off on you… hehe…) Okay this is stupid… I LOVE DEMENTED LITTLE KIDS! THEY ARE SO CUTE! (Which, when you think about it, is strange. I am so mixed up…) One thing I’m not mixed up about, and which I THINK is what I’ve been trying to get at, is THIS STORY SO TOTALLY, MAJORLY, AWESOMELY, OVERPOWERINGLY, TREMENDOUSLY, COMPLETELY, WHOLLY, ENTIRELY, FULLY, UTTERLY, ABSOLUTELY, FROM TOP TO BOTTOM, FROM TIP TO TOE, WONDERFULLY, MAGNIFICENTLY, SUPERBLY, ASTONISHINGLY, FANTASTICALLY, BRILLIANTLY, DELIGHTFULLY, MARVELOUSLY, AMAZINGLY ROCKS! It is so great! (I would’ve kept on going with the descriptions but I kinda gotta get off…) yeah keep it goin! I loved it!

pleze write much much mo

Yay! You updated! And with such an awesome chapter! Course all your chapters are awesome. Please continue with this! Samara seems rather cool!

I don't mind as long as you keep updating. And Samara is really psychic, rught?