Oh, this is going to get messy isn't it?

I dont know anything about TW and only a little about DW. But any story with Lorne Whump is good! I like how you've intertwined the different shows... even if I'm more or less unfamiliar with the characters. :)

I won't say anything,but that was tense

Wow, I cannot wait for the next one

Uh-Oh, is Max in the family way again? being able to use Ancient machinery or is this a big cliffy coming

o, interesting plot twist

Interesting and gripping

so for those of us who don't have lj...are you gonna link us if we ask pretty please?

i'm enjoying this :-)

Oh I can't wait for the interlude. Loved Rodney''s reaction to Jack's flirting, it's Rodney to a tee

Great stuff, nice to see Teyla in the story

Ah, Evan's all jealous. So Davros was an Ancient, nice twist

I can't wait to find out what the first bit's about

Uh-oh, that's not good, keeping me on tenter hooks tho :D

Phew, you really are racking up the drama

Ooh ooh, what's happening now, don't keep me waiting too long please