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Deanna Benner
2008-06-30
ch 27, anon.
abusewrite more plz!
KLCtheBookWorm
2008-06-30
ch 27,
abuseCongrats for Az and Glitch!
She'sGotHighHopes
2008-06-29
ch 27,
abuseI don't know what's wrong with this site, but my story alert didn't show up in my email when you posted. I could have read this much sooner! ARGH!

I loved this chapter. The funeral for Adora was very nice and I liked that she was buried as a hero and around royalty. At least now she'll be protected so nobody will try to stop her journey on the long road again. I absolutely love that Az and Glitch are going to have a baby. I have this picture in my head of Glitch fainting during the delivery. LOL. It's a shame that DG couldn't use the gifts from the Ages against Zero before. Sometimes protecting something involves a little revenge. I hope DG will be able to defeat Contra without turning it to revenge, otherwise, the Ages might be of no good to her.

Have fun on your trip! And thanks for updating again! Terrific chapter!


Jaime
nadeshiko1
2008-06-29
ch 27,
abuseYAY for updates!!
Nice way to handle Adora's burial. She deserves as much with her heroic deeds at the end of her life. Nice touch with the rose from DG!
Glad to see DG getting the third peice from the Ages. I especially liked the wizard's personality!
There's one more peice to get? Looks as if DG's not gonna need it or get it till the final battle.
Az is pregnant?! YAY! I'm just glad that the battle with Contra didn't hurt the baby!
Can't wait for the enxt bit!
Angel Monroe
2008-06-27
ch 26,
abuseM, goodness. The whole end of the chapter (after the whole rape attempt and Adora thing, of course) just leaves you with a kind of warm, fuzzy feeling, doesn't it? I'm glad Adora ended up being herself again in the end, and I'm really glad she was happy for DG and Cain. It would have put a huge damper on the romance if she'd gone Wicked Witch of the West and said, "I'll get you, Wyatt Cain, and your skanky little girlfriend, too."

So yeah, good chapter. Though seriously, Zero is working on life number...what? Seven? Eight? He can't have too many left. Some time or another, they will have to actually catch or kill him. Anyway, can't wait to read more. Thanks. O:)
PalisDelon
2008-06-27
ch 26,
abuseOh my gosh!

I'm not crying, really I'm not.

Okay, well, just a little.
nadeshiko1
2008-06-26
ch 26,
abuseAw! You broke the fluff-o-meter with all the fluffy DG/Cain romance!
Poor Adora. She came to her senses, only to die again. But, she truly belongs on the road beyond life.
Glad to see that neither DG nor Cain are giving up on each other!
Question now is, what's Contra gonna do now?
Can't wait for the next bit!
KLCtheBookWorm
2008-06-26
ch 26,
abuseGood redemption for Adora. I got the sniffles.
romance-princess
2008-06-26
ch 26,
abuselol i have been on edge waitng for this update and o boy was it worth the wait. once again flawlessy written and bang on the mark characters. i love how adora and cain have said there final goodbyes and he still chooses DG which is fantastic but to be honest could it have gone any other way. so is the last chappie or am i getting more of this delicious fic ?? if it is the end i have one word for you ... SEQUAL lol i hope you get my hint lol
ok much love for writing this
lulu
nadeshiko1
2008-06-23
ch 25,
abuseYAY for updates!
Okay, so Adora was brought back from the dead, but she seems to still be controlled by not only Contra/the witch but Zero as well. Quite frightening actually.
DG has such a big heartto let go of Cain just so that he and Adora can be happy!
Cain's declaration to DG was absolutely WONDERFUL!! I swear that I had tears in my eyes! Why can't all guys be like that?
Nice to see Az kicking butt against the witch after all that's happened to her.
Hopefully Az & Glitch can get to Cain & DG before something awful happens to either one of them.
Can't wait for the next bit!
Donna8
2008-06-22
ch 25,
abuseAz and Glitch's relationship really works. I love how they act around one another.

Part of me feels sorry for Adora because she believes Cain stopped loving her, but she's dead to Cain and Jeb so it's not hs fault.
jessiechaos
2008-06-20
ch 25,
abuse*Bitting her nails, on the edge of her seat and then* NO!

Can't wait tell there more. ^_^ your doing a great job. I just makes my day to see your story in my inbox.
ted
2008-06-20
ch 25, anon.
abusefreakin' amazing! I love this story. Way to keep the action and suspense going. Please continue!!
She'sGotHighHopes
2008-06-19
ch 25,
abuseOMG, I love what Cain said to Adora and DG. I loved how Cain could tell that the woman wasn't his Adora by the way she let Jeb be treated. Please have Cain get to DG in time before Zero hurts her!

Loving this story. Can't wait for more.


Jaime
Cat Yuy
2008-06-19
ch 25,
abuseFor some reason when Glitch blocked the spell from hitting Azkadelia I thought,
"Only Glitch can prevent an Azkadee fire"
My mind works in weird ways.

“The witch taken down by a dizzy spell,” Glitch thought to himself with a grin, “I knew I loved you for a reason.”
He loves her fo her mind

“And if you ever need to find a specific Cain tin man, just follow the gunfire.” “And now I remember why I love you so much,” Azkadellia smiled as Glitch
She loves him for his brain, maybe thats the real reason the witch removed it.
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