I loved this! You've captured Lindsay's "cop" persona and inner struggle with just wanting to be Lindsay with Cindy perfectly (IMHO).

Yay! *yup that's my incredible review for an awesomely fantastic read*

:o lol FANTASMAGORICAL! :P No really, that wasn't just good for a femeslash story or even a fanfic, that was brilliant for any story all together!)

Aha! I found you. On FF.N. With WMC stories. Fantastic. I lurved this, by the way and my god do you have Lindsay's character down pat. I vote for more of these little ficlets. A lot more.

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TheTex

I really enjoyed this fanfiction, Lindsay/Cindy are my new favourite pairing- I always loved the books, (James Patterson is such a brilliant writer!), but the TV show really brings the characters to life and, whether intentional or not, Lindsay and Cindy have some great chemistry
Anyway, your fanfiction was very well written and perfectly in character for Lindsay, good job!

I've seen this one over on (I think) LJ and at P&P, and each time I enjoy it more and more.

Great job on this. Nice job on the perspective and keeping Lindsay very... Lindsay-ish. Hope to see more from you in the future!

Wow...this is perfect! You've captured Lindsey perfectly...this is amazing. :D

Awesome you should do a sequel and let them get into a little bit of trouble.

You captured Lindsay's perspective personally.

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I absolutely love this pairing! You did an excellent job in capturing Lindsay and how I hope she feels about Cindy. Keep up the amazing work)