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| Jessiy Landroz 2008-01-08 ch 1,  | abuseThis piece gave us a nice 'single mother' feel to Paine, though I didnt get what happened to Nooj till the second read- the dude keeps dying most of the time, you'd think that he'd wanna live for a change; men~ such stubborn goats when they really set their mindes to it... then again Paine is no better, she an be hardheaded too, so lets hope their kids dont suffer the same, XD; Other than that, the spinning wheel bit in the end threw me off.. what did that have to do with anything? O_o; |
| heaven-monument 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuse...Wow. ...just... wow. An excellent piece of writing, but confusing in some places... although, this is what I have come to expect from your works. It kinda adds to the mystery of this fic. Just a couple of things... NOOJ ADOPTED A COEURL? PAINE IS RELATED TO AURON? ...PAINE AND BUDDY? (Puddy!!) How ridiculous. And fantastic. Somehow I think Buddy would make a great father... 8.5/10 |
| DarkenedPetals 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI have to admit i got a little confused! But it was good - i liked all the different scenarios. Really nicely done! x |