Hey! Its really cute! xD I wish i could write poems like u! =P Really love your poem. =3

I think I might cry. Oh wait i am! that is so sweet.I just love the stories about them. Keep up the work!

I like your poem but I don't like the last verse :/ It's just so... not english. lul. Everything else is fine with me but amg. Just that ONE verse that just gets me :( But it's s'alright my pumpkin pie :)

It was so romantic! That is true. I even gonna wrote it in my poem book that I always have with me so... I just luv iit!

It's a nice beautiful poem describing Ayumi's feelings.

Ayu-chan,

*sniff sniff* so emotional... it was a cute poem but it was a bit weird with the rain and all... were u trying to make the words rhyme?? I guess so.

Shia ^^

PS: I still like it! =)

Erm... it was good, but why did you rhyme at some points then stopped... and 'Every day felt like it was going to cry out and rain, rain, rain... how many times is it going to rain?