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TheGuiaX 6/4/11 . chapter 17
wow! Really enjoyed every bit of ur story... Amazing da way dat u hv managed 2 write da way dat JKR does... Im thisty 4 more! So write soon... Update daily if u cn...
27dayz 3/26/10 . chapter 17
Wow, I really like it a lot. I can't wait to read more about Rast and what it'll be like for him to learn about his parents. I'm curious about the woman's voice, too, which obviously seems to be conntected to Rast's wand. I don't think the voice is Bellatrix, but I could definately be wrong. I thought it was cool how Rast did see his mother in his dream. I hope you continue this fic though. I really enjoy reading it.
B 1/11/10 . chapter 17
Whoops. Link sent me to the last one first. So I had to re read fourteen and fifteen.

I'm really interested in Snape and Rast. And Lucious...Lucius, excuse me.
Looking forward to your next chapter...
Chasing 3/29/09 . chapter 8
this was pretty good-much better than expected. You caught Rowling's style pretty well too. Keep up the good work, and keep improving!
excessivelyperky 12/2/08 . chapter 14
Ah, I see Snape is still trying to protect the Wizarding World, and the children in it. I'm glad Albus told him the truth as far as he knew it. And I see that despite his words about being equals, the old Headmaster is the same as ever.
stella8h8chang 9/29/08 . chapter 2
My favourite bit was the way you wrote Teddy as having a four-part heritage! This came up in a fandom discussion awhile ago how a balanced person needs to have a bit of every House in them. Good characterisation with both boys as well!
stella8h8chang 9/29/08 . chapter 1
Sorry it's taken me so long to get around to reading this how I wish I'd started earlier! The first chapter is gripping. I adore the idea of a child born due to Amortentia growing up to father a child under its influence (JKR did say that Tom's birth from a loveless union was very significant). The way you balance describing things and leaving things to the imagination (something which a lot of fanficcers don't do well) is also fantastic.
excessivelyperky 9/19/08 . chapter 13
What a wonderful Christmas! I think it's a blast that playing against (gasp!*Ginny Potter* is so way cooler than playing against her husband to a kid. And I'm glad Draco is back at Seeker. But _with_ Ron Weasley? This is going to be er, interesting.
excessivelyperky 8/2/08 . chapter 12
I'm glad Snape is able to amuse himself now that he has time to, though even that has a cunning plan attached. I do think the castle would have recognized Snape as Headmaster without Harry's intervention-he was allowed the use of the office while Umbridge wasn't (on some lists, an Obvious Faux Pas of this nature, even though committed by the author, is called a Flint).
I love the way Lucius came in with his amulet, to dispell Victoire's dawning realization that this was rather too easy.
Ah, Slytherins!
excessivelyperky 7/25/08 . chapter 11
Technically, Andromeda was Narcissa's sister, as was Bella. I do enjoy Snape's way of Pointing Things Out, though.
I foresee further complications, probably quite soon.
Middy-kun 7/20/08 . chapter 11
Haha I love this line, "Professor Malfoy would know when anyone entered his office, and the Jelly-Legs Jinx was merely a way to slow the intruders down. They quickly ran to Gryffindor Tower, both awed by and fearful of the Professor’s methods.
Also, David Eddings! I have his books of the Belgariad and the Mallorean.
Anyways good chapter! Glad he got the runespoor.. it's only a matter of time now before he finds out his heritage. Also, I don't see a poll in your profile?
Sakura Lisel 7/19/08 . chapter 6
I don't believe Rast. Just because of what Lucius was like in the past, he's willing to just forget the ELEVEN years of love and affection his aunt and uncle gave him before he came to school? The little git should take into account that Lucy and Cissy never did anything to show they were the evil gits they used to be while raising him. In fact if they WERE evil then they could have raised HIM to be evil, but instead they raised him to be GOOD, despite who his birthparents were. *lol
if they were stil on the side of evil they'd have shown it to him before now, or would have RAISED him to be as evil and closedminded as Draco was when he was Rast's age. Their still the same people he grew up with. The way Rast is treating his guardians is how those seventh year Gryfinndor's treats HIM on his first night at school, simply because of his last name.
Middy-kun 7/12/08 . chapter 10
Ahh how could Rastaban treat Lucius this way? He should be honored that the Malfoys even took him in.

Anyways, I can't wait to see his reaction when he finds out who his dad is haha.
excessivelyperky 7/10/08 . chapter 10
Snape on a throne of bones, kicking away its former owner...that is such a cool image, I wish I could actually draw.
Neat chapter!
blpaul 5/31/08 . chapter 9
Uh-oh. That can't be good. I wonder what conclusions Rast, Teddy, and Valerie will jump to. Good job with this chapter!
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