LOL good jod

ysterical!!

Ha ha to Grissom.
How is he gonna explain how he proposed to Sara?!
Love it Love it!
Keep up the good work. Luv the smut!

ello again,
adding another one of your stories to my alert, heck, il just add you as an alert, lol,
(i try not to do it to often due to the 50 emails i get a day for stories, lol)

hey i agree with everyone... i think you definitely keep your smut muse alive and kicking... and i will love to hear what gil's answer is? PLEASE !

um who said that your not good at writing smut? cause I dont see it :D i think you shoudl keep that particular muse alive ... maybe give it mouth to mouth haha sorry dirty minded ANYWAYS yeah i loved every part of your story i think tha grissom would proabably be that kind of guy that said things that he cant in situations that are... passionate to say the least and i just loved the ending made me laugh so hard... ehehheh hard SEE I CANT STOP!! ;D great job KEEP WRITING
;D - Zoey

This was cute.

Hah!! That was hot AND funny! Great little story! You should keep your muse awake though, I'd love to read more of your smut!

lmao, haha you know im all for a smut story but the ending is what stole it for me, but dont get me wrong your smut was great! but the ending was soo funny, i laughed so hard and spat tropical juice all over the computer screen...now it has a lovely fruity smell to it,lol. anyway that was great good job!

What was wrong with the actual reason? LOL! Would like to see a 2nd chapter with what they came up with!

For a short story...this is a keeper...I laughed right out loud at the end of it...write some more...

Did you mean the title as a pun?

YOU DID PRETTY GOOD SO DON'T GIVE UP WRITING SMUT I PERSONALLY LOVE TO READ THOSE KIND OF STORIES

Got right into it, good job! It was funny too. Loved it.

Connie

Not really the story any of us would want to pass on to our children!! But, I can just picture their faces!!