Reviews for Father, How Could You

Reviews For: Father, How Could You

bloo ducki 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abusedon't listen to that flowerchild person. This is your fic and can be anything you want. If you want Johnny raped, he will be raped. (That's an odd sentence) His parents SUCK so it's very possible he got raped. Anyway, flowerchild is just jealous. I loved your oneshot! It was great!
Infidel 2008-02-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was interesting, though rather rushed and a little vague. I can understand that based on the rules of this archive, though. The only thing I would say is that I'm confused as to why you've left this a oneshot. The way that you ended the story indicates that you are continuing this. If you're going to end it as a oneshot then I would suggest making a much more conclusive ending that doesn't leave a single string dangling. It felt that the ending was rather abrupt, which leads the reader into thinking that there's more coming.
KaL KeY 2008-01-15 ch 1,	abusehey...i liked...its really good!... i dont mind that its a oneshot...but does that mean you're not going to continue the other version of this...the mutichapter verson?
xo Kit Kat ox 2008-01-05 ch 1,	abuseThe last review is pretty harsh in my opinion. This is FANfiction so most people who post stories here are “fanbrats.” It’s people expressing themselves, yet most people get way to serious over things and get angered so easily by someone’s creativity. I think this was pretty well written. It’s interesting because I never thought of Johnny’s father sexually abusing him. This is in no way meant to offend the last reviewer in anyway, but I think this was worth writing and someone getting rapped is a serious issue that I think the last reviewer doesn’t realize happens everyday to someone somewhere. This is not sick and disgusting it just goes into more depth about how Johnny’s father could have been abusing him. Good job. Keep writing!
xXFlowerxChildXx 2008-01-04 ch 1,	abuseI am sorry. I cant handle this. Take this as a flame I don't care. Well, lets just call it a flame and save you some energy. This is completely disgusting. what kind of gross perv writes this crap? I hate it! Johnny doesn't get raped by his father, okay? What drug(s) are you on? I am totally serious! You idiot fanbrats are too much to handle. This fic (thank goodness a one-shot) needs to be chop and burned. I am not saying that you are a bad writer, because I didn't even focus on grammar and spelling. I ain't one to critic about that. Please use your creativity, imagination, and drive to write something worth writing.

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