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Reviews for: Unprepared
TechNomaNcer28
2008-04-19 . chapter 1
the ending was nice,is she feeling something for Luke when she felt that tingly feeling?
drachemeister
2008-01-04 . chapter 1
I'm the one who grabbed your feet, yet I somehow missed this XD

(I was probably too busy laughing at my own drabble...)

Too bad Tear finds out Luke's a jerk once he wakes up, lol

I liked your Tear though. She had a bit more of that feminine side than people give her credit for (I'm glaring at English VA), yet the soldier was still there.

It was cute and short, and more Abyss fics in general from you would be great ;)
Ark Navy
2008-01-03 . chapter 1
Though at a moment's glance, I can't quite relate how that would suddenly make Tear realize her fault--perhaps that it was another human life involved?--but nevertheless, I thought it was a good insight into Tear at that moment.

You have a nice writing style, too. ^^ You should try writing more--oh, wait, you have 11 fics in the two fandoms I roam. O-oh... my apologies. I should pay more attention... ^o^;
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