wow. english isn't even your first language? That would explain some of the obvious (if it's your native tounge that is) slip ups on wording in crazy for you.

no huh, aika erikoista lukea yugiohia äidinkielellään :D
en ala arvostelemaan suomiversiota koska en yleensäkään lue mitään suomeksi joten se on automaattisesti jotenkin kökkö 8D
great fic!

hahaa! despite the horror of it, t'was funny :3

oh tykkäsin tosi paljon! oot ilmeisesti suomalainen? no kuitenki, se oli tosi hyvä!ONKO SIIHEN JATKOA?!=D

My first reaction was: That's hilarious. -_-; I'm just morbid like that, I guess. Really good story, you write very well in English, I think. Was the stranger Yami Bakura? But he was a STRANGER...wait...that's just a little confusing, that's all. But I really think you're a good writer, and it was such a CLEVER idea. Totally something Yami Bakura would do. -_-; Poor Ryou.

thats brillient.
ah, the joy of twisted love signs.lol
Kudos
-s.o

It's so hard to find good Bakura x Ryou these days, yet you never fail to put a smile on my face and I love you for that ;D

Anyway, I love your story to death, I was just wondering who send that heart, although I'll automatically assume Bakura, but Bakura seems kind of rude to Ryou at the shop, but we all should know it's Bakura right? ...um, RIGHT? Or is there another crazy stalker obsessed with Ryou? ;) Hope you update, yeah?

I guess it would be strange for me to say that I did get a chuckle out of the message left by Bakura XD. Creepy at the same time though. Good job.

hui hitto ku oli pelottava toi loppu! aika hassua lukea suomenkielistä yugiohia ;D

Wow, That was scary.. lol
So , was it left bey Bakura ?(the red eyed stranger from the store)
creepy and in character.. very good. thank You

Oli tosi hauskaa lukea välillä suomeksi ja tendershipping on suosikkejani ^^
Mutta harmikseni huomasin että suomenkielisessä oli enemmän kirjoitusvirheitä kuin englanninkielisessä(enkuks olevassa ei edes tainnut olla...) ~.~

Oh, cool! I know how to say 'I Heart You' in Finnish!

Oh, no! This can't be a one-shot! It's too open! Aw! I don't get it! I don't understand! This was cool and I think there could be more, but, y'know, thats not for me to decide. *sigh*...Well, thats a sorta creepy story...

...more needs to be explained! ...please...?

^-^ haha, eew. you gotta love the macabre side of things...

Very interesting. I think that you did a very good job of writing the English version in spite of English not being your primary language. Please continue to post your work as that will greatly improve your grasp on the language and help boost your confidence (after you continue to receive lovely reviews). Thank you for posting this.