Hui hitto miten pelottavaa. o.o

Mä en tiedä kestäisinkö mä jos saisin tollasen viestin... O.O

As usual, I'm late on the scene and review about a thousand years after everybody else has. Such is life! I adore this piece. It reminds me of Tell Tale Heart. Well, there's the heart of course. Otherwise it isn't that similar... But they're both short, and say everything that needs to be said.

BAKURA. That brief scene where they touched was -electric-. But so casual it seems impossible Ryou wouldever figure out- and now my mind runs away with possibilities. Bakura apprehending him with a knife later on... Disturbing. But wonderful.

Hui saakeli!

Meikäläiseltä meni pasmat ihan sekasin kuin luin ton enkunkielisen version. Sit luin suomalaisen ja sekös kolahti ku Vinttisen muorin oikee suora. Mut takasin asiaan: toi oli ihana (silti vähä karmiva hyvällä tavalla). Ehkä se on se että suomi on äidinkieli, mut mulla ainakin tuli semmonen fiilis että siinä versiossa oli enemmän kuvailua.

Anyway, se oli hieno. Kannattaa tehä muitaki tommosia.

With lots of kisses, Abunai-san

wow. english isn't even your first language? That would explain some of the obvious (if it's your native tounge that is) slip ups on wording in crazy for you.

no huh, aika erikoista lukea yugiohia äidinkielellään :D

en ala arvostelemaan suomiversiota koska en yleensäkään lue mitään suomeksi joten se on automaattisesti jotenkin kökkö 8D

great fic!

hahaa! despite the horror of it, t'was funny :3

oh tykkäsin tosi paljon! oot ilmeisesti suomalainen? no kuitenki, se oli tosi hyvä!ONKO SIIHEN JATKOA?D

My first reaction was: That's hilarious. -_ I'm just morbid like that, I guess. Really good story, you write very well in English, I think. Was the stranger Yami Bakura? But he was a STRANGER...wait...that's just a little confusing, that's all. But I really think you're a good writer, and it was such a CLEVER idea. Totally something Yami Bakura would do. -_ Poor Ryou.

thats brillient.

ah, the joy of twisted love

Kudos-s.o

It's so hard to find good Bakura x Ryou these days, yet you never fail to put a smile on my face and I love you for that ;D

Anyway, I love your story to death, I was just wondering who send that heart, although I'll automatically assume Bakura, but Bakura seems kind of rude to Ryou at the shop, but we all should know it's Bakura right? ...um, RIGHT? Or is there another crazy stalker obsessed with Ryou? Hope you update, yeah?

I guess it would be strange for me to say that I did get a chuckle out of the message left by Bakura XD. Creepy at the same time though. Good job.

hui hitto ku oli pelottava toi loppu! aika hassua lukea suomenkielistä yugiohia ;D

Wow, That was scary.. lol
So , was it left bey Bakura ?(the red eyed stranger from the store
creepy and in character.. very good. thank You

Oli tosi hauskaa lukea välillä suomeksi ja tendershipping on suosikkejani
Mutta harmikseni huomasin että suomenkielisessä oli enemmän kirjoitusvirheitä kuin englanninkielisessä(enkuks olevassa ei edes tainnut olla...) .

Oh, cool! I know how to say 'I Heart You' in Finnish!