AMAZZZIIINGG! I mean crazy good it made me cry

nice name STUPID TECHNOLOGY was very creative

Omg i loved this story, I loved everything about it. You made the characters true to SM and did everything perfectly. This is the best thing I have read on Fanfiction yet! Oh how I hope you continue to write, I mean you are amazing! I especially loved the ending, about how she healed herself! You are amazing, and have a talent for writing!

Keep it up!

Love this story- it has a great moral. Youre an exellent writer :)

I like it.:)

That was one of the best stories i have ever read. Keep up the good work!

WAH! I am sneaking this before I go to school and I have to leave now! But I'll be back in the afternoon!

good story. edward was very devoted.

This story is amazing! Definitely one of my favorite fanfictions to ever read :D

so everything is paralyzed from the neck down... that is sad and really suckish... Great 1st chapter!

that was such a good story.

i read it all in one go.

im glad bella healed that girl.

you put everything into good detail and explained it really well.

my friend mara told me to read your story. I was skeptic. I read your all-human (although it WAS good for an all-human) and I thought if it's another all-human...So i pulled it up and I started reading. And reading. And reading. And then i was crying. And sobbing. And the people at Starbicks were giving me weird looks. But I didn't care.

I came to school the next day. Mara was like so? I couldn't speak. I was too emotionaly traumatized, too shocke and amazed. I have not actually worn colered clothing since. I am mourning for Bella becoming parylyzed.

My friend Ally was like "why are you wearing all black?" I showed her your story, and said "I'm mouring Bella becoming parylyzed." We now are the leaders of the Goth Chick Club. All because of your story.

I think any story that can do that to me is surely well written.

I will go paint my toenails black now. Bye.

Alexa

Your story as incredible I think that you had all of the characters nailed down perfectly. Your story was really touching it actually made me cry and that takes an awesome story. I just want to say I LOVED this story I hope you write more!

hm i just confused myself immensely, i thought she was parazlyzed from the waist down not the neck down.

hm must of not been reading as closely as i thought i was.

But it just got more interesting.

Hi, I know you already finished writing this story but I just had to say this. If Bella had been changed into a vampire, wouldn't she have to hunt? Just wondering...