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| calvin 2008-01-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, i do admire the writing technique, but i find it slightly distastefull, it was i bit Graphic for me and mostly it was just plain WRONG: who would turn a sock yellow?!??!?Oh and the gay sex innuendo was a bit much! |
| Athenian Grace 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHA! funny! harry should have just let him continue it though. gosh darnit HAHA i loved it |
| UndesirableDesire 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseOmg that is kinda awkward xD I like it! :D |
| Bemily 2008-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseHa, I do quite love this story! It turned out nicely after we got the wand being stuck somewhere down...Love you! Bemily |
| Michelle Berger 2008-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseAs much as I hate Harry Potter's fandom, this wasn't too bad story wise, and you know it made me laugh. End was good too, I think you'll please a lot of people showing that Harry wanted it to... "Slash" stories where you THINK they meaned one thing but they didn't and only one/no characters have any gay feelings, well, those suck. Here both persons were closet gays, which is why this is good. I just found Ron saying ding dong sounded dumb, though. I'd think at his age he could say cock or dick at the least. PS: Harry Potter is for faggy goth kids :D |