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calvin
2008-01-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseWell, i do admire the writing technique, but i find it slightly distastefull, it was i bit Graphic for me and mostly it was just plain WRONG: who would turn a sock yellow?!??!?Oh and the gay sex innuendo was a bit much!
Athenian Grace
2008-01-04
ch 1,
abuseHAHAHA!
funny!
harry should have just let him continue it though. gosh darnit
HAHA
i loved it
UndesirableDesire
2008-01-03
ch 1,
abuseOmg that is kinda awkward xD
I like it! :D
Bemily
2008-01-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseHa, I do quite love this story! It turned out nicely after we got the wand being stuck somewhere down...Love you!

Bemily
Michelle Berger
2008-01-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseAs much as I hate Harry Potter's fandom, this wasn't too bad story wise, and you know it made me laugh. End was good too, I think you'll please a lot of people showing that Harry wanted it to... "Slash" stories where you THINK they meaned one thing but they didn't and only one/no characters have any gay feelings, well, those suck. Here both persons were closet gays, which is why this is good.

I just found Ron saying ding dong sounded dumb, though. I'd think at his age he could say cock or dick at the least.

PS: Harry Potter is for faggy goth kids :D
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