Sweetly poignant. A lovely piece, though depressing.

Mm, I like the progression of kisses as the war drags on and Adora's thoughts with each kiss. The last paragraph took me by surprise, but then again, it's the perfect way to end a beautiful fic.

Wahoo!! Ms Quinn is back on the podium where she belongs! I'd hoped you hadn't given up on She-Ra, although I would've preferred some Adam/Adora (hehe) ;)

You did a good job with The First Kiss, showing different stages of the war and leaves it open to a wider story. The ending was superb. More, more (a/a)!! Mweheehe